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May 11, 2007 18:57

Gray
All those muses
Wished away
And you
Remained
Embracing the muteness
The darkness
Of this cell
Where music turns
To breathing
Where love is but
A drink
And that heart
Transformed
To secret
On my closing lips

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iggylani May 14 2007, 16:06:36 UTC
this post reminds me of chloe.

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unoflatu May 14 2007, 17:50:46 UTC
It reminded me of Eitan's poems when I reread it. Theres nothing completely original about it I guess xD

Was still a good meditation

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iggylani May 14 2007, 23:34:53 UTC
well either nothing in this world is completely original, because the world has surely seen it all before, and because we are products of our environment.
OR
everything is completely original because every little thing we do is ours, if we didnt do it it would not exist. or would be different. because it would be someone else's.
i go back and forth between the two but today im the mood of the second option. my brother in law would tell me im getting too philosophical too fast. what do you think? :)

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unoflatu May 15 2007, 04:07:58 UTC
You have a brother?!!

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