Tipsy -- Second Chapter: Burning. Now Complete.

[lilmisfits8811]

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That was how Kenpachi found Retsu, her back to him. He made no noise to disturb her or interrupt his view of her. He watched as she pulled her hair from her back, to rest over one shoulder revealing her bare back to his hungry eyes. His eyes traveled from her smooth shoulders, down the slender curve of Retsu’s back and stopping at where the

Comments

[lady_green_bat]

Well the only way to become more comfortable writing those types of scenes is practice, practice, practice. It makes for a win-win situation for everyone especially me when we dear readers get to see the fruits of your labour :D

Keep Uno/Ken alive!
<3

[lilmisfits8811]

Yeah, well I doubt I'll keep practicing the smut. It's too awkward to write and I don't feel like it's even real. >< It's like....just bad....and did I mention awkward? lol. But glad you enjoyed it. I'm trying to produce Chapter 3 of A Coffee House Romance within two weeks, we'll just have to see how it goes.

[panda_luvs_pie]

HOT. *drools*

I like the way you write, your style strikes me as unique. Please continue to grace us with your mad literary skillz. :D