Darling, Erase These Lines

[universexo]

❇ Title: Darling, Erase These Lines for keizeria
❇ Pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, mentioned junmyeon/jongdae
❇ Rating: R
❇ Length: 4,692 words
❇ Warnings: dubcon/noncon, gore, disturbing imagery, aphrodisiacs, murder, cannibalism, whatever else might come with a hannibal!au
❇ Author note: THIS WAS SO FUN TO WRITE I don't think it's possible to express how fun

Comments

[jonginsomniac]

oooooooo god this is going to haunt me for a while but nope, i'm sort of into jongin (and kyungsoo) being slightly insane so i enjoyed reading this none the less uvu

[parkourdeer]

ahh thank you ^^

[sooshit]

first off, this is really beautifully written. it's really descriptive, and there's a lot of imagery, especially when it came to kyungsoo having hallucinations. they were very vivid to me, and i could follow along easily like i was actually experiencing them, so i thought that was really really nice. i had to read through this a second time just to make sure i understood the italicized parts in between, because at first i didn't quite understand (i've never seen hannibal) but otherwise this was a really amazing fic!!!!!!!! very well done a++++++

[parkourdeer]

i'm glad you liked the hallucinations! i was a bit afraid people would get... turned off by the talking scrotum u no buT THANK YOU FOR READING AND COMMENTING and im really happy you enjoyed it!

[onnaonah]

Talking to balls sounds messed up enough :3 I like messed up stuff, this is very fun! ^u^ Thank you!

[parkourdeer]

[talking scrotum voice] Whee!

[keizeria]

Anon, you just...gah! You've just made my day!!!!!

OMG I never imagined it would be this amazing. It's even more amazing reading through the second time.
The pace, the way you worded the entire story, the way Kyungsoo started to lose himself, and Dr. Kim!
When I wrote the prompt, I had this image of Kyungsoo licking the blood off his knife as he was preparing food. But you choosing Jongin as Hanibal is superbly refreshing. Kyungsoo's journey downward his mental destruction is like a madder, more disturbing version of Disney's Fantasia. I love it. Love it. Love it.

Thank you so much, anon. Can't wait for the revealed date to come so I can thank you properly :)

[parkourdeer]

ahhHHHHHhhhhHH I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKED ITTTTT!!11!!

tbh when i first saw hannibal!au i was thinking of ksoo as hannibal but for some reason i thought that if i had kyungsoo as the will graham there might be better hallucinations and... yes, talking scrotum

scREAMING IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT THOUGH !!!! SCORE THANK YOU SO MUCH thank you for the prompts btw they were Extremely Excellent

[kais]

UM OK so i'm gong to try to make this as coherent as possible but???
first off, definitely going down in history as one of my favorite fics ever. i did not think hannibal would translate well into text but honest to god you used imagery in a way i never thought possible for fanfiction. i could see the fic so fucking vividly in my mind like??? and the smut just made it ten times hotter like my mind would have been blown without it but the fact that it's there always blows my dick away just saying
i like how you took pm the exactly hannibal plot but intensified it?? does that make sense?? like with the hallucinations and the talking scrotum LOL and the pace of the story was absolutely perfect and how it's chopped up and the lines in the middle A+++++
im gonna cry i never thought a hannibal au could be this fucking good :'''') bless you for writing this and bless your recipient for this au
im gonna be thinking about this fic all day i luv u

[parkourdeer]

uwu i am not sure what to address first with this comment but i have never heard the phrase "blows my dick away" and just imagined like a dick like flying across the room and out the window and i am very proud of myself for making that happen. thank u for letting me know i blew ur dick away!!!!

fewaihofhdskhgiroawjhkdfsk;dwijpgrwkjli comments abt my imagery always get to me i rly appreciate them so much ty ty i was wondering how i might do the hallucinations so im glAD!!! IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT THANK YOU FOR LEAVING THI S WONDERFUL COMMENT I APPRECIATE U!!11!!

[kais]

you're so welcome you deserve all the comments on the world on this it's the very first fic on my rec i love it so mu c h
also i hope you don't hate me for what happened over soccerndcoffee you know people make mistakes and change and yeah

[parkourdeer]

fjasdklhgiweahfjdklsj kdal thaNK YOU WOW this means a lot to me thank you so much !!1!!! tha nnK YOU111!!!!

and nah friend its ok!!! we all make mistakes and learn and change and stuff so its cool p.s. i did go in pretty aggressively so y/k i hope u dont hate me for that either man