PoT Fic: Recombinant Chapter 12

[universal_doll]

Here's chapter 12, I hope you guys like it! This one starts another action sequence . . .

Title: Recombinant
Author: Dolly (universal_doll)
Rating: PG to PG-13
Characters: Echizen, Tezuka, Fuji (primary); Tachibana An, Tachibana Kippei, Momoshiro (secondary); and the rest of Seigaku.
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy, AU (or rather, Alternate History/Timeline)

Comments

[tsumetaitsubasa]

No! Must...save...Ryoma!! Go Fuji! Go Fuji!! Rescue your princess the team's freshmen and tenshi!!

And don't worry! Your pacing is just fine!! Unlike mine which is so slow. XD

Mind if I friend you?

[universal_doll]

LOL! And thanks, I'm glad you think it isn't too slow. I am such a details person it takes me awhile! ^^;

And sure, I'd love it if you'd friend me! I'll add you back too. :)

p.s. LA was a blast, thanks for the well wishes and hope you had a happy Halloween too!

[tsumetaitsubasa]

XD The pacing is just fine. ^^

YAY! *friends you*

Thank you, you too. *though kinda late* That's awesome. I've been there once but only briefly I think... OO!

[tsumetaitsubasa]

W00T! First post!! Happy Halloween and have fun in LA!!

~~Leeann

[su24]

arghhhhhhhhhhh....a cliff hanger!!! noooooooooo....
by the way, it is an awesome chapter!!! bad ryoma!! should tell his guardians more !!! hoho, but if he does, than his not ryoma right? :D

[universal_doll]

Thanks! And yep, that's Ryoma, not at all the "sharing" type. ;)

[andersenmom]

Oh, I can't wait to see how Fuji and Eiji get everyone out of class!

And I can't wait to see how they get Tachibana there, too. Heh.

Excellent - and Ryoma... probably should have gone to school - but then, where would the story be?

Excellent job. Have fun in LA!

[universal_doll]

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you're still reading! ^__^

And of course, Ryoma couldn't just do the easy thing, oh no. He has a knack for finding trouble. ;)

[lucathia_rykatu]

Aww, no one has their cell phone on but Fuji!

Well, it's good that Ryoma is stubborn, but no so stubborn that he doesn't realize he needs help when he needs it!

“How nice to have you call me,” Fuji replied pleasantly, as in truth people rarely called him when he actually gave them his number.

Hm, I wonder why? XD;; *g*

[universal_doll]

Oh, its nice to see that someone actually noticed that little line! Fuji seems like the kind of person that people would be a little nervous to call, even with his permission. XD He's cool, but kind of scary sometimes!

Thanks for commenting! :)