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PoT Fic: Recombinant Chapter 11

Oct 20, 2006 16:56

Here's Chapter 11, a little sooner this time since I'll be pretty busy again this weekend. :) And I finally made myself a new icon! I'm not good with those fancy paint programs, so I always just use pics of my dolls as my icons. ^^; This time I used a pic of my SD girl, Ryoma, who is based off of the same character from Prince of Tennis. <3 It ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

Recombinant andersenmom October 21 2006, 00:48:21 UTC

Yay! I saw you were going to post, and I had to wait patiently (and then not so patiently) for it to actually show up...

Oh, what fun! I love the powers (nicely done) - and feel for poor Kippei, who eventually is going to have to explain the damage to the back yard...

I loved this, though: At least no one had given Kawamura a racket, yet.

That one made me laugh out loud. Great, great job!

Re: Recombinant universal_doll October 28 2006, 22:55:04 UTC

Thank you! And I just had to add that part with Kawamura, lol. I'm glad you noticed it! :)

Re: Recombinant andersenmom October 29 2006, 02:30:44 UTC

It was a very nice touch.

su24 October 21 2006, 02:06:14 UTC

ohh, the powers fit them so nicely!!! :D any finally, the boys get to meet ryo-chan aka ryoma-kun!! huhu...that's so fun!!! and fuji & tezuka being some how "jealous" that tachibana and his sister are the one ryoma went to stay if she's a girl!! heh, it's getting interesting!!

my favourite line "But some quality time with Yumiko and her excellent fashion sense..." HUhu, i see torture for ryoma in the future...hahah

universal_doll October 28 2006, 22:55:36 UTC

Thanks for your comment! Yep, Ryoma's secret is out. ^_^

lucathia_rykatu October 21 2006, 02:28:10 UTC

Hehe, I liked how Kikumaru glomped Ryoma before even noticing that he was in girl form.

Hm, I'll be sad to see Ryoma stop staying over at An's house...though his stay at Fuji's will for sure be amusing!

universal_doll October 28 2006, 22:57:02 UTC

Thank you! :)

That did seem like soething Eiji would do, he's so enthusiastic about things. XD And though I won't be describing much about Ryoma's stay at the other's houses, they've just decided that they'll take turns having him over. ^_~

mirralissa October 21 2006, 06:25:24 UTC

Jealousy ))) Oh, it's all very intresting!

Poor Ryoma (>"<) I can't imagine what will be with Ryo-chan in Fuji's household. They are so creepy ))

universal_doll October 28 2006, 22:58:17 UTC

Thanks for commenting! And we can only imagine the, um, fun, that Ryoma will have at Fuji's house. ;)

anonymous October 21 2006, 10:15:41 UTC

This was great. o(^-^)o Please update soon! Poor Tachibana--Seigaku taking back their own.

universal_doll October 28 2006, 22:58:38 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it! :)