Oh wow, this is lovely. You even made me forget how annoyed I was with Cristiano!
I loved the narrative from the waiter's point of view. It gave a very interesting perspective. Not to mention the way everyone seemed to notice Cris and not Owen. I agree with the above comment, if it was me I'd probably notice Owen first!
It's long, sorry. I hope you like it. :) Long, in this case, is good. Long is my friend. And I love it! :)
That you started with describing the two from the waiter's point of view... WIN. I just had to laugh at his cluelessness. I love how he wondered how they could be friends, I know a lot of people would (though of course, Owen is gorgeous and Cris is the lucky one)
You couldn't have known this, but I love (written) sex in small spaces, so the flights are made of win ^____^
Yay summer and mosquitoes and sun burn and bursts of rain. You make them so cute with it all, but it's more real that way too.
The first rays of early morning sunlight managed to work their way into the room as the sea breeze blew gently through, causing the thin linen curtains to billow, and the sunlight made Cristiano’s face glow as Owen laid on top of him, thrusting gently. He watched how his skin glowed in the light, how his soft brown eyes unfocused and refocused with every movement in him, felt his body beneath him, tasted his lips and his
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his back facing Cristiano (who still smelled vaguely of salad) I am laughing way way way too much at that.....but that's a good thing! :D
This was really really cute. Love the comfort and familiarity between them. It flows really well. And the waiter's POV was great as well. Loved how clueless he was and then suddenly it hit him at the end. Poor guy!
I am really really beginning to love this pairing. :D
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I loved the narrative from the waiter's point of view. It gave a very interesting perspective. Not to mention the way everyone seemed to notice Cris and not Owen. I agree with the above comment, if it was me I'd probably notice Owen first!
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It's long, sorry. I hope you like it. :) Long, in this case, is good. Long is my friend. And I love it! :)
That you started with describing the two from the waiter's point of view... WIN. I just had to laugh at his cluelessness. I love how he wondered how they could be friends, I know a lot of people would (though of course, Owen is gorgeous and Cris is the lucky one)
You couldn't have known this, but I love (written) sex in small spaces, so the flights are made of win ^____^
Yay summer and mosquitoes and sun burn and bursts of rain. You make them so cute with it all, but it's more real that way too.
The first rays of early morning sunlight managed to work their way into the room as the sea breeze blew gently through, causing the thin linen curtains to billow, and the sunlight made Cristiano’s face glow as Owen laid on top of him, thrusting gently. He watched how his skin glowed in the light, how his soft brown eyes unfocused and refocused with every movement in him, felt his body beneath him, tasted his lips and his ( ... )
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I am laughing way way way too much at that.....but that's a good thing! :D
This was really really cute. Love the comfort and familiarity between them. It flows really well. And the waiter's POV was great as well. Loved how clueless he was and then suddenly it hit him at the end. Poor guy!
I am really really beginning to love this pairing. :D
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