A Rooney/Ronaldo fic. My first one, and my first ever LJ post, so sorry if I've got it wrong!

[andneverbecruel]

 
Discovery

“I think we might have a problem.”

Sir Alex, overseeing training at Carrington from a speculative distance, turned to his second-in-command and arched an eyebrow. When Carlos was not immediately forthcoming, apparently choosing his words carefully, Sir Alex scowled and said impatiently, “Spit it out, man.”

Comments

[shandoras]

I've been wanting to read some new Cristiano/Wayne for some time now, great timing :D

Very good for a first fic, not to mention your first LJ post? Wow. Now the fic, I love the point of view you've chosen, not something you see often. It was short and sweet, easy to read. So, thank you for this and hopefully you'll keep writing and posting!

I'd suggest you include something like the following info before the lj-cut in the future, just because it's easier to navigate and get an idea of what your fic is going to be like :)

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[kobean]

first of all, welcome to the community and welcome to live journal. glad to have you here! :)

secondly, this was lovely. i love that you wrote it in the perspective of carlos and sir alex. i don't think i've read a fic like this before, it's very different and unique and i like it alot. and your writing is spectacular. your descriptions were all kinds of wonderful. i especially loved this bit:

Wayne, who by nature talked a lot but said very little, was now silent and entirely withdrawn; ethereally pale with dark bruising under his eyes that spoke of sleepless nights. Cristiano, who liked to vociferously announce how he felt, was equally brooding; the pain clear in his dark, troubled eyes.

poetic. ♥

can't wait to read more from you!

[hiro_chan]

oooh. I like this, cos you have it from SAF and CQ perspective :D.

well written, you most definitely have to write more :D.

[rizzyr]

Awwww, that was cute! :) Loved that it was from the coaches' perspectives....gives a whole new outlook on Cris and Wayne's relationship!

Welcome to the community!!! Hopefully we'll get to read more from you than just this! :D

[carameltrap]

Welcome to the comm, dear!

Lovely fic. Short, sweet and simple and in the coaches' POVs, no less. For a first time fic, this is written very well and there's no cliche in it. I love it.