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shandoras December 27 2007, 22:58:55 UTC
OOOH! IT'S HERE! And late gifts are so awesome because then it feels like Christmas all over again ;)

*REEEEEEAD*

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shandoras December 27 2007, 23:13:31 UTC
I love you, whoever you are, for writing this because this was so wonderful I can't find words to describe it.

*sniffs* This was sad and still you made me happy in the end. *wails* OLEEE!!!
I want to quote the whole thing. The beginning with the testimonial, GOD how I could picture it and I want there so bad and GAH.
I love how you included all of them oldies, they are so very lovable together. Your writing wins.

He’s dragged in the direction of the showers, and when they are alone in the last stall and Paul’s pressed up against him, he doesn’t feel old and decrepit, his joints and muscles don’t ache, and he remembers just how lucky he is to have lived this life with this man beside him all the way.
PERFECTION ♥

Thank you x78624690560598187695

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yanks02 January 4 2008, 03:48:13 UTC
Eeeee! I'm glad you liked it. I was so worried when I got the pairing as I love both of the guys to pieces but not together or anything. I'm so glad you liked it though!

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yanks02 January 4 2008, 03:48:23 UTC
Thank you very much!

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kobean December 28 2007, 01:58:01 UTC
i have goosebumps.



They’ve been together through victories and defeats (shared their first kiss in a drunken stupor in Barcelona that magical night) beside each other through triumphs and injuries (shared quite a bit more in the gym and the physio room when they were both injured in 2005) and through it all they have been friends, lovers, godfathers for each other’s children; in other words inseparable.

beautiful in every possible way. and you've never written this pairing before? you could've fooled me. you wrote them, and had them. just had them. it was such a pleasure to read this. and i hope you write more of them soon. because after this, i am just craving more.

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yanks02 January 4 2008, 03:49:08 UTC
Hahaha I don't think I could write them again. I complained to fangirl_lizzie and nikki1804 everyday that I was hopeless and couldn't write them. But thanks for the compliment!

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aeroporto December 28 2007, 02:48:00 UTC
That was beautiful ♥

Really, really, beautiful.

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yanks02 January 4 2008, 03:49:17 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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hiro_chan January 2 2008, 23:46:06 UTC
This is absolutely lovely.

This :

He’s dragged in the direction of the showers, and when they are alone in the last stall and Paul’s pressed up against him, he doesn’t feel old and decrepit, his joints and muscles don’t ache, and he remembers just how lucky he is to have lived this life with this man beside him all the way.

made me all warm and fuzzy with a little bit of aching heart because it's happy but also a bit wistful but good all the same. I also love the flashback, it's lovely :).

Well done :D.

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yanks02 January 4 2008, 03:49:43 UTC
I got a bit wistful writing it too. Ole. :((((

Thanks!

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