Comments | uninspired_me: [Glee fic] Lilith (1/1)

uninspired_me

[Glee fic] Lilith (1/1)

Nov 01, 2010 02:58

Title: Lilith

Rating: NC-17

Spoilers: None.
Wordcount: ~3,500

Warnings: Language. Sexual content. Kinda dark themes, but nothing too scary. (I don’t think.)

Prompt: Succubus!Rachel with Puck as her not-so-unwilling victim.

Summary: Not only must young Officer Puckerman deal with the hottest heat wave ever to hit Lima, Ohio, but there’s also ( Read more... )

one-shot, pairing: puck/rachel, fic: glee, rating: nc-17

Comments 8

beta_goddess October 31 2010, 17:52:06 UTC

What a clever idea! I'd have liked an explanation of why she left him alive, but I guess it's implied that his recognizing her made her soft-hearted toward him. Still, nicely spooky!

(And the Schuester domestic... giggle)

uninspired_me November 2 2010, 06:20:57 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Hehe...you're pretty close. I didn't explicitly say because I don't think Puck understands why...and since the entire story was from his POV, it was a little challenging trying to say why survived without actually saying it.

(hehe... I just had to slip that in... :P )
Thanks again!

cailet_06 October 31 2010, 21:50:40 UTC

Hmm do you watch Supernatural? Cause I could totally see this becoming a crossover. Regardless, awesome job!

uninspired_me November 2 2010, 06:25:07 UTC

Hehe. I have watched a bit, but only the first 2 seasons. I've been meaning to continue, but I haven't gotten round to it yet. I don't really have plans to continue, because I've never writtten a 'supernatural' type story before and I'm not sure if I could do it convincingly enough. But if I do figure out how, I'll definitely give it a try.

Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

cailet_06 November 3 2010, 18:37:35 UTC

Ah, the reason i asked is because Lilith was BIG character on Supernatural!

uninspired_me November 4 2010, 01:38:27 UTC

Lol. Really? I had no idea. Hahah. I got 'Lilith' from my ~research (read: wikipedia), because apparently Succubi are called Liliths or something. I should probably watch Supernatural then, maybe I'll get inspired for a sequel/conslusion ;)

lj515 November 2 2010, 04:17:28 UTC

This was awesome! You don't see many Glee supernatural/mythic/whatever stories so I was glad for this one to pop up. I totally want to read this "another story altogether," sounds badass. I agree with Cailet_06 about the crossover with any magic-like show, but if you're not into that, just a sequel would be amazing. Look at me, you've turned me into a begger!

I totally loved that line about the Domestic at the Shues. Too funny. LOL. I think it goes without saying that the sex was hot, but I gotta say my favorite part was that Noah knew her by her kisses even through the veil of magic. Le sigh. Great work.

uninspired_me November 2 2010, 06:29:49 UTC

Hehe. Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked it! :D
I'm sorry to say that I dont really have any plans for a sequel. I've never written a "supernatural" story before this one, eventhough I have been a fan of many supernatural shows, and I don't know if I could do the 'story resolve' justice. But if I do find a way to, I'll definitely give a sequel a try.

Thanks again for your feedback! I loved hearing your thoughts! :D