strung out on speed, maxed out on lies, I know you're to blame, but I can't say why

Apr 09, 2007 00:08

Preamble:

I decided I wouldn't participate in areku1993's challenge, because, well, it designated that it had to be at least 500 words, and we know how I feel about writing things that're long. Yes, that counts as long. You can laugh if you want. My feelings won't be hurt ( Read more... )

fic, trc

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michirukaiou April 9 2007, 07:10:08 UTC
Wow, this was great! I enjoyed reading~ ♥

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uninformed April 11 2007, 02:17:33 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ♥

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uninformed April 11 2007, 02:19:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

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ontogenesis April 9 2007, 12:37:56 UTC
Excellent. I was hoping someone would write a Yamano one (couldn't hatch up a decent idea myself, lol), so this was a pleasant surprise. Wonderful style and , as dev said, you wove the theme into the story quite deftly.

I hope you get over your fever soon.

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uninformed April 11 2007, 02:21:52 UTC
Thank you!

I was trying to think of something string-like that hadn't been written about yet, and came up with a bow, so Yamano it was ^_^;;

Thanks, I am feeling a bit better now. ^_^

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clamp_yuuko April 9 2007, 15:45:43 UTC
Hyuu:D Really great<333 Really love it!

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uninformed April 11 2007, 02:22:09 UTC
thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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chibifrieza April 9 2007, 17:37:33 UTC
My favourite is the first paragraph of 13.

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uninformed April 11 2007, 02:24:19 UTC
I changed that paragraph around eighteen million times, so that comment really pleases me ^_^

I started the fic with all but the last lines of 9 and 11, then tried to write something inspired around it ^_^;; 13 ended up being my favourite, though.

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