122. FANFIC: "When we wake on Sunday mornings"

Mar 22, 2013 03:28

Title: When we wake on Sunday mornings
Fandom: EXO
Pairing/Characters: kaixing / Kai & Lay
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2.1k
Summary: Inspired by “Sunday Morning” a poem by tt

Author’s Note: A very happy birthday to Jade :D You said the other day (...weeks ago) that you wanted a kaixing fic based off this poem; I hope I don’t disappoint ( Read more... )

k-pop, k-pop: exo - kailay, k-pop: exo, creative writing: fanfiction

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byakuya_777 March 30 2013, 01:53:56 UTC
Why did you made me tear up so bad????
This is beautiful, and is my favorite pairing, and I feel all fuzzy inside and askbdabdadba
Beautiful ♥ ;~;

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unfinishedwing March 30 2013, 21:51:33 UTC
lol awww this wasn't written with the intention to make people cry, i'm sorry haha. thank you so much for reading and commenting ;u;

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kira_min18 April 5 2013, 07:45:47 UTC
WHY DO I NOT KNOW ABOUT THISSSS NDANSNAKJSBJKASBBASBJSABSDBFSD WILL BE BACK WHEN IM COHERETN SOBS

I MISSED THEM SO MUCH AND NO ONE REALLY WRITES THEM THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM I'M CRYING

this, is beautiful in every way; the way jongin thought that he's just a shell without a soul, the way yixing wants to love jongin, broken or not and the way yixing wants to do the job of loving for jongin and for himself, and at the last part i cannot anymore ;~~~~;

and i'd like to quote my fave bit out of the many lovely things that you wrote:
Jongin will return and collect the things he’s forgotten, as if saying, hyung, I’ll come back to pick up the pieces, only to leave again with more items left behind.
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thank you so much for writing! <3333

((also, i lurk around your lj to see if you have new stuff for me to read esp kaixing hurhur pls don't get creeped out i love you ;3;))

/leaves a gif of kaixing practically smooching in this comment bye

... )

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unfinishedwing April 7 2013, 00:58:18 UTC
KIRAAAAAAA ILU ;A;

stop flattering me with your beautiful comments, i don't deserve it ;~; but your comment put a big smile on my face :D

and wow that kaixing fancam looks 193018230x better in slow motion

thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥♥♥♥♥

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jinhongsaek May 10 2013, 11:45:13 UTC
"some people are broken shards of a mirror who don’t want to be put back together again.
There are some people, though, who can love all those pieces, broken or not."
these lines feel like a punch to the gut and i'm oddly so attached to it.

the last part of this story, though. ; ~ ; my creys i loved it. i have such a soft spot for couples and mornings and waking up together (idk how to phrase that nicer??)

and i approve of model!Jongin (tho i'd love him less angsty :c)

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unfinishedwing May 16 2013, 21:09:49 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting!! ♥ haha and sorry for making this piece so angsty, i will try to write something happier next time! ;u;

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azure_sunflower May 20 2013, 07:28:47 UTC
I...I... I cant JOEIJRIOJFMOK#U* explain what I'm feeling now. I'm just a hardcore shipper of KaiLay. It's been a while I haven't read your kailay fic so.... May be I'm overloaded now.

I love your kailay fic always. Some of imaginations I can feel it a lot ; A ;

May I ask for translating your fic into Vietnamese? Hope you give me a chance. Thank you so so so muchhhhhhh!!! TT^TT

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unfinishedwing August 4 2013, 17:02:24 UTC
so sorry for the late comment! so happy that you enjoyed this fic!

yes you can translate this fic into vietnamese. just please give me credit, put a link back to here, and make sure to give me a link to your translation! thank you :)

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azure_sunflower August 5 2013, 16:15:41 UTC
ah yes. but I wil finish your fic some day in September, just let you know that. And despite the different languages, thank you so much to let me translate your fic. By the way, you are our favorite author about KaiLay fanfic :") your fics are a good way to learn English though X"D

I will send you my link as soon as I finish it :">

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azure_sunflower February 15 2014, 13:44:11 UTC
http://unfinishedwing.livejournal.com/33073.html?thread=117809&#t117809

I'm really sorry that now I can reply you. Hope you forgive this mistake. As I promised before, here is my translated fic with the permission from you. Ofcourse you cannot understand my language, so I take the note in red.

Thank you so much for understanding and this beautiful fic TT^TT
http://fannie0611.wordpress.com/2014/01/25/trans-fic-oneshot-when-we-wake-up-on-sunday-mornings/

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xxhna June 24 2013, 14:13:10 UTC
lovely fic. insecure jongin and yixing trying to make him see that he's worth loving.

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unfinishedwing August 4 2013, 17:03:15 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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