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fic: on the bright side

Feb 03, 2010 14:33

Title: On the Bright Side
Author: sinverguenza
Pairing: Hatter/Alice, from SyFy's Alice
Rating: Heavy PG-13 for a semi-descriptive sex scene.
Status: 2/2
Word Count: around 3000
Summary: “She looks up at him, and his dark eyes are so sincere, his face as intense as the day he came to visit her and told her mother that his name was David.” This is not a ( Read more... )

Comments 15

alchemistc February 3 2010, 22:44:34 UTC

<3

I don't really have anything constructive for you, I just love this. So beautiful and real.

somewhatcliche February 3 2010, 22:47:48 UTC

There is only one other Alice fic I can think of besides this that I loved enough to read not just one time, but several times.

This is wonderful. Beautiful. What a perfect ending. It feels so true to them, so deeply within the realm of possibility that it seems like canon. This is how I see them after the series. This is how I want to CONTINUE seeing them after the series.

Thanks for sharing! I hope you write more for them :)

pink_flame_87 February 3 2010, 23:00:06 UTC

I loved it. It felt very real and painful but also hopeful, what more could I ask for? Great job.

asweetdownfall February 4 2010, 00:04:50 UTC

alfdslgjlalgsdm I don't even know what to say about this. THEIR TALK. THE SEXING. THE THOUGHT OF HATTER HAVING ALICE ON HIS PHONE. THE BEAUTIFUL ENDING. alsfmglg;sg;sk

Your writing slays me.

greeneyes0911 February 4 2010, 00:40:36 UTC

I love this! I'll admit I was a wee worried to start because it was a little depressing. But then that is Alice isn't it? And it's honestly how girls are sometimes. We worry about silly things. We stress out about things that don't make sense. But it's good to see that sometimes that ends just fine. Nice work!