fresh feeling (peter/claire, heroes)

[unfinishedline]

Title: Fresh Feeling
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire.
Rating: G. AU after Fallout. Peter and Claire are not related.
Status: 2/3. 2600 words. I’ve written it already, will be posted as I edit.
Summary: Claire’s got a crush. Tender and fluffy, with a dash of angst.

Comments

[joanna_484]

Bwwwaaaahhhhhhhhhh! The first flying scene was magnificent! Claire's innocence is endearing, and you highlight it effortlessly with her wonderment with the clouds' lack of substance. The image of the 2 of them flying together, coupled with Claire's wide-eyed, pure delight in her feelings for Peter and this new experience, is perfect *sigh*

When he felt her cold fingers on his neck he dipped them lower, where she was warmed by the sun, and by him, too.That line just so beautifully captures what a special person Peter is and what a special person he is to Claire

[sinverguenza]

yep this fic was full of flying, yes? its so cute. i would just die to see it made canon.

aw thank you. im so glad you liked this fluff - so glad it made your heart ache because that means it meant something to you.

That line just so beautifully captures what a special person Peter is and what a special person he is to Claire :)

thats a nice way of putting it!

i love your reviews. thank you, joanna!

[ohsodazzling]

*claps!*

Ah, nothing like Paire-crack after a long day at work! You continue to be an amazing author, and one of my very favorites. :) Claire's growing frustration with his casual treatment of her is precious. Can't wait for the neeext one!

[sinverguenza]

thanks so much. hope you like the new chap.

[iamlillykane]

loved that last scene, love. ♥ looking forward to the next. ;)

[sinverguenza]

glad you liked! thanks dear.

[open_embrace]

awww! this is gorgeous :) i cannot figure Peter out, and if thats hard for me it must SUCK for Claire...

*waits for part 3*

[sinverguenza]

hehe, i bet she would be frustrated indeed.

[nayden]

You definitely, definitely move me. I swear to goodness I'll be hard pushed to find better fluff out there that was as gorgeous as it gets and for someone who doesn't feel comfortable doing it, get out of town! Missing your calling, although you're one of those rare breeds who can do all kinds of fic genres and make them work perfectly. Respect to you, please hurry back with part 3

[sinverguenza]

wow, well i am so flattered that you were moved by this. thank you. what a compliment! youre just so sweet to me, thank you.

[nayden]

aw wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it. all true hun so be flattered *as jayne scurries off to see if you've posted part 3 yet*

[sinverguenza]

haha, its up indeed ;)