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Nov 12, 2009 20:11

Document title: hopeless otp fic. This is one of the ones I really regret not finishing, and one of the longer WiPs here.Ryan's under Brendon. He's under Brendon, pushing up, and Brendon looks down like he's afraid, like he thinks Ryan wants to get away, and Ryan doesn't at all; he clutches at Brendon's arms, lifts his hips, thrusts up. Denim's ( Read more... )

brendon/ryan, 2007, porn

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redorchids November 13 2009, 10:36:39 UTC

Oh, God, this is good. I love that you've posted all these not-WIPs. It's like a big bundle of joy for me to just immerse myself in and giggle with OTP glee. Totally made my morning. :DDD

cyclogenesis November 13 2009, 18:59:04 UTC

Yes, that is what I was hoping for! Because some of these even I would go back and reread and enjoy. /o\ <3!!

kaytvengeance November 14 2009, 23:23:38 UTC

This one is lovely. It feels like it could be a snippet from something bigger, but at the same time it totally works on it's own, because you're left with plenty to imagine!

Hopeless otp is the best.

cyclogenesis November 15 2009, 00:11:27 UTC

Hopeless OTP is the best for sure, I think this was just going to be a lot of fucking. I don't know that I ever had a really ending for it, just maybe some reflection on how quickly the band rose up to fame and how that reflected their beginning - that's just how things go with the two of them together, things get intense fast (and, as we know now, unravel with the same speed).