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Nov 12, 2009 19:32

Original notes:So I was writing this fic where Ryan and Brendon snuggle on the bus, because it's cold and rainy out and Ryan has the best blanket and they were going to lie there and listen to Counting Crows and it was going to be REALLY sweet, but then I started thinking about other things, and uh. Well. Yeah.Ryan swallowed, pushing back into ( Read more... )

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nyquil_love November 13 2009, 20:11:41 UTC

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cyclogenesis November 13 2009, 20:34:57 UTC

<3!

wovenindelibly November 15 2009, 21:51:35 UTC

This is hot, and the hottest part imo is when Brendon apologizes but keeps going? that whole paragraph tbh, I can really see it. Oh my gosh, I LOVE when Ryan's grinding back against Brendon's dick! rawr rawr. It feels Ryany in such a way that it's demanding and yet submissive? If that makes sense?

cyclogenesis November 16 2009, 04:18:22 UTC

I think this was literally the first Brendon/Ryan thing I ever wrote. ;♥; It probably feels Ryany because that's how I've written Ryan ever since, for the most part. \o/

youfeelittoo November 27 2009, 14:17:24 UTC

goddamn, that was amazing..
bahah, I feel like I need a drag.

your ryan was wonderful. <3

auberryroad January 27 2010, 19:36:45 UTC

Haha, thank you! I do enjoy him. <3

palkia January 27 2010, 19:15:56 UTC

i have an essay to write, due tomorrow, but instead of doing that i'm right here, reading this.

submissive!ryan is my favorite ryan. ever. i could really picture this happening, and i don't know why, but my favorite line was:
Brendon brushed his thumb over the outer edge of Ryan's eyelid, taking a trace of wetness off his lashes

i guess i could just see that that very clearly in my head. and now i'm off to write about capital punishment /o\

auberryroad January 27 2010, 19:36:29 UTC

Priorities, man! I always used to put off school stuff to write fic...oh education. \o/

Submissive Ryan is my favorite too, yum. Glad you liked this! <3