Fic, Fujicest, "Really It's Everything"

[unexpectedtimes]

Fifth chapter of the 'Lights' series. I think there are two more parts after this one - there was only going to be one more, but Shuusuke thoroughly misbehaved himself in this chapter, and took the whole time having a conversation with Taka when he was supposed to be... well, you'll see. ^_~

Previous parts:

1001 Tokyo Lights | Letting Go | Only

Comments

[michirukaiou]

Aww, that was so sweet. I love Taka. ♥ (And I particularly enjoyed the imagery in this chapter! It was very beautiful~ *^^* I wish I had even half of your talent in writing...)

[vanillafire]

Taka is a big sweetie bear! *loves him too* ♥ Fuji's so lucky to have him as a friend! He's making me wanna write TakaFuji, though. XD (Thank you very much! ^__^ There were a few lines that I really enjoyed writing... *^^*)

[michirukaiou]

Well, TakaFuji is good, too. :) (But I don't like it nearly as much as Fujicest.)

[vanillafire]

I like TakaFuji, so I feel I should write some, but Fujicest just overwhelms all else with its awesomeness, and I find I never want to write anything else when I have the option of Fujicest. It's just too interesting a pairing!

[xelloss_poo]

Omg. Taka is just so much luv right now. I'm all teary-eyed. It was just. Taka was just so cool and supportive and just everything.... yeah. Taka is Luv. *wipes eyes*

Now all we need is a little Fuji-bear to go off and find his little Yuuta-kitten to molest love. *nodnod*

But seriously, so much Taka-Luv.

*cuddlehuggz* I await the next section. :D

[vanillafire]

chalaine once said that Taka was the best thing that could ever happen to Fuji, and I really think she was right! Taka's just so... wonderful! :o It's just a shame that my Fuji has eyes only for Yuuta, unless it's a world where Yuuta's completely rejected him... because I love TakaFuji too! ♥ Taka needs more love. *nods firmly*

Fuji-bear will indeed go off and find his little Yuuta-kitten... it just all depends on whether Yuuta-kitten wants to play with the ball of wool that Fuji-bear has brought with him! 'Cos he might not want to anymore...

*Fuji-bear-type cuddles* So do I! Fuji will probably find further ways to extend the story in that part too. He keeps on doing that...!

[xelloss_poo]

Its because Fuji-bears need their Yuuta-kittens. *nods sagely* And so they do everything in their power to capture them and keep them. *nods more* That just makes writers write more and more. Fuji-bears are devious that way.

[vanillafire]

Fuji-bears really are very devious. I wish they were devious enough to convince the merchandisers to make actual Yuuta-kittens, though! ;_; Or, at least, make Shishido plushies, and then I could take his hat and plaster off, and draw on a scar. XD

Yuuta as a kitten = adorable. :o Although I don't know how adorable Yuuta would think it was. +-_-

[pixiesmith]

Really, I liked Takashi in this one. Also, I liked the way you explained his assertiveness so that he wasn't out of character. Supportive Taka is really sweet and I like the friendship connection that you've written.

I feel really bad for Fuji you know. It's unfair how they can still love Yuuta regardless of what he does, but ostrasize poor Fuji. I know that they think he led Yuuta astray, but he's still their son and they should support him. I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that when Fuji talks to his family, things might become just a smidgen better.

Only two chapters to go! No! I'm really sad that such a brilliant fic is ending.

[vanillafire]

I'm glad Taka being assertive was believable here! Normally, he's not so much, but here, especially since they're much older now, he knew he had to be in order to stop Fuji acting so unhinged! Taka's just such a lovely friend. Fuji's really really lucky. :D

It does seem horribly unfair that they can still accept Yuuta, doesn't it? It's not as simple as it seems from Fuji's POV, though - and that will indeed be explored in the next part. :D

I'm sad too, although excited as well, because I've never finished a fic before! I do still intend to finish everything I've written, of course, but wow, such a milestone! XD

I'm really glad you're enjoying this! ^_^

[shi_no_blank]

OMG Fuji. You made Fuji break down... and I BELIEVED it. I never read a fic in which he breaks down that much that I believed. You maked Fuji's breakdown so... Fuji. That's how Fuji would breakdown.
Taka was also very cool. I liked how he was with the kiss.
This fic deserves a longer comment (And lots of love) But I shouldn't even be reading it in the first place, I don't have time. Yes, your fics are just that good, to make me read and review when I don't have time.<3

[vanillafire]

Originally, I hadn't planned for Fuji to kiss Taka at all, or then to start crying afterwards, but Fuji sort of insisted on it, so I'm glad that the breakdown worked - really, really glad! ♥ Making Fuji cry was something that terrified me, because it had so much scope for being laughable, but I like the fact that he did, because so much was wrong! *pets him* Poor baby.

I think Taka is maybe the coolest person in the universe. Fuji couldn't have a better friend! I like the way he handled the kiss too... if it had been ten years ago, he might've kissed back (:3), but I'm so glad he didn't!

Thank you very much for reviewing, even though you didn't have time! ♥ (I read fic when I really don't have time for it too. And write it, as well... :D;)

[shi_no_blank]

That whole scene worked extremely well.

I like the way he handled the kiss too... if it had been ten years ago, he might've kissed back (:3), but I'm so glad he didn't!
... You said everything I wanted to say right there.

The fic deserved it!

[airairo]

Fuji's lips were soft in the way that stars looked soft, from very far away; they burned when up close, and his fingers clung like gravity. <-- that is one of my favorite sentences ever.

You made me cry! ;_; AND you made me not want Taka and Fuji to kiss and that's just really weird because I've never not wanted that before. XD But but but... Gah. I wish I had a friend like Taka. He's the greatest thing in the world. Shuuuuusuke... go get Yuuta back. >_<;;

*just plain wibbles at you*

Mooooore. ♥

[vanillafire]

Eeee~ I'm glad you picked that line out, because it's maybe my favourite line I've ever written... :o

If I made you cry, then I reckon we're even, because you keep making me cry with The Bird. ^_~

AND you made me not want Taka and Fuji to kiss and that's just really weird because I've never not wanted that before. XD

*giggles at you* XD I didn't want them to kiss either, but Fuji insisted on it, and I'm kind of glad he did, because I really enjoyed writing it. *cough* I'm glad it was just a kiss, though! Except, sex in the dark in Fuji's living room could have been really hot, in an awful, train-wreck sort of way... I am a horrible person.

Taka truly is the greatest thing in the world. I want to be him! :o I hope he wasn't too tired after seeing Fuji. ^^; (It disturbs me slightly that I say 'I hope...' about my own characters, because really, I should be the one pulling all the strings. XD

[starlightstorm]

(It disturbs me slightly that I say 'I hope...' about my own characters, because really, I should be the one pulling all the strings. XD;)

The fact that you're not is what makes your writing so lovely. It's like you're ... hm, attuned to them, in a way. The way you talk about them outside of a story shows that, as well. It means the story evolves on its own, rather than a puppeteer writer forcing things to happen.