fic | if you could take all the heat in your heart

[unevenfootsteps]

if you could take all the heat in your heart | harry/louis & zayn/liam. | nc - 17. | 5,500. | “Can you hear the ocean?” Louis asks, combing his fingers through Harry’s tangled curls. They smell of peppermint and mango. / “No,” Harry sighs. “I can just hear you.” | warning: slight D/s relationship/undertones, body paint. | Hope you all enjoy. Sorry

Comments

[cynicaliscious]

this is so beautiful.

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much!

[rumpledlinen]

oh, this is absolutely beautiful.

i love this:

Louis has never been a romantic at heart, but with Harry it’s different. It’s different because Harry’s heart grows like a tangled tree, limbs screwed into the ground, and he’s grown his heart in Louis’ body. Grown him like tangled roots that Louis can’t help but nurture.

oh, so many feelings. your louis and harry are so perfect and so lovely and this is so beautiful. the writing is calm and soft feeling, and i love the way you wrote louis' painting. also: i love "they don't fuck in england, because it's childhood" because that line just seems so real to me.

gorgeous, really. :)

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much! it's so nice to hear that i've gotten them down in this sense of characterization. :3 thank you so much, again!

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much for reading. i'm flattered.

[snuffleslove]

i never wanted this to end.
tysm

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you!

[kiwilvr97]

your writing is so beautiful and emotional and bare like everything's laid out plain and simple yet flawlessly. i'm a huge fan of it. amazing amazing amazing

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoy my writing so much. (: