Comments | undying_desire: Paying Extra [9/13]

undying_desire

Paying Extra [9/13]

Aug 09, 2011 13:41

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series: paying extra, pairing: gtop, fandom: big bang, fanfic

Comments 25

kutunakal August 9 2011, 17:44:39 UTC

SPOT!!

kutunakal August 11 2011, 15:58:20 UTC

Seunghyun saved Jiyong!!! Thank you, haha

Is Yunho going to get a revenge? I hope Ji and Seunghyun are not going to suffer more.

Okay, I'm on to read the next chapter. I'm sorry for the lateness!! ^^

undying_desire August 11 2011, 17:02:57 UTC

Hehe, I'm glad you came back to comment. Yay. ^.^

Gosh, I wish I wasn't going to make them suffer more, but I'm such an evil person. T_T

jin2jin August 9 2011, 18:17:37 UTC

ohhh so good x3 glad seunghyun managed to save ji. i kinda feel sorry for u-know tho..=[ killing off jae like that D:

It was a bit rushed yes, but that didn't make it less enjoyable at all. bae was drooling eh xD i can totally imagine him sitting like that..he's way too adorable haha

happy they're back together~ waiting for the next chapter :3

undying_desire August 9 2011, 23:45:44 UTC

I know, but it was either Jae or Ji in my mind. Haha. I'm really happy that the chapter was still decent despite the pacing. *Dances*

The next chapter has been dying to be written for ages now. I'll update soon. ^.^

lethallycute August 9 2011, 18:59:49 UTC

DUCK AND COVER!!! I nearly jumped out of my skin when i started reading this.
*Super Hero Music* Seunghyun to the rescue!!
Now for the naughty bits to happen before U-know pops back up and tries to take his revenge.

undying_desire August 9 2011, 23:51:41 UTC

I absolutely love you for the 'super hero music.' I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. What if U-Know died in the explosion though? =O

But yes, naughty bits for sure. I've been dying to write some since the beginning.

lethallycute August 10 2011, 01:33:13 UTC

Hmm...i think he might have died in the explosion but then again...he might not have. my brain is ready for which ever conclusion!!

miracleshining August 9 2011, 19:20:17 UTC

Absolutely gorgeous! I'm such a sucker for action sequences and though it was short, it was really well put together. You got the sense of movement right from the beginning, which I loved!

Great job, looking forward to the next chapter!

undying_desire August 9 2011, 23:56:19 UTC

The action in this one seriously took off and before I knew what was happening, it was over. I'm glad it was decent though. ^^

Thanks for your comment as always. *Bows* You know how happy you make me. xD

irm_cik August 9 2011, 19:43:08 UTC

yay!!!and the hero of the day is.....jiyong! :D rolf not even mad that u killed jae he can die a million times for gtop
omo how sweet and brave of hyunnie to go save ji by himself <333
ooh i just hope u-know won't kill one of them in the future...just plz let me have my gtop alive and safe and together forever
update soon honey~

undying_desire August 10 2011, 00:13:57 UTC

My heart broke when I killed Jae. xD He was my first kpop love. But yes, GTOP trumps all.

I can only guarantee the safety of half of GTOP right now. . .which doesn't really count much does it? Hm.

Enjoy the next chapter packed full of GTOP love. ^^