Comments | undying_desire: Paying Extra [7/13]

undying_desire

Paying Extra [7/13]

Aug 05, 2011 14:34

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series: paying extra, pairing: gtop, fandom: big bang, fanfic

Comments 39

peacensafety August 5 2011, 18:48:29 UTC

I like this! Great job!

undying_desire August 5 2011, 22:56:29 UTC

Thank you darling. ^.^

kutunakal August 5 2011, 18:57:22 UTC

FInally a progress, and they are oficially together. Good!^^

Oh, but I hope Seunghyun is the one doing the fucking here, not the other way round. haha

Next chapter pleaseee.. :)

kutunakal August 5 2011, 19:02:55 UTC

And Seungri with a carrot hanging from his mouth? I LOLed because of this, haha

undying_desire August 5 2011, 23:02:11 UTC

And our baby Jiyong gets what he wanted. Hehe. I'm glad Seungri can keep people entertained. xD

As for the sex, I'm sure Jiyong is tired of always taking the lead. ~.^

jin2jin August 5 2011, 18:59:12 UTC

yay! seunghyun came around, hah noone can refuse ji after all! and bae will probably too :D

hero huh, go go jae, just dont kill ji or bae xD i like this chapter a lot. ofc things are keeping me interested :P

waiting patiently for the next chapter =3

undying_desire August 5 2011, 23:04:30 UTC

Haha, Jiyong must have that attractive personality. You're probably right about Youngbae too. =P

I'm not going to guarantee no one will die. . . *cough* Stay tuned and thanks for reading darling. *Bows*

jin2jin August 5 2011, 23:55:06 UTC

being killed by Jae...wouldn't be that bad i suppose~ *coughs*

And I'm sure Ji has a personality like that, it's kinda impossible to dislike him XD yay for being right bout bae, i love that guy to death :3

*stays tuned*

scythegyen August 5 2011, 19:18:15 UTC

Why is this so good. this is the first if I've liked they way everyone is written, even YB... oh well hope comes around though.

undying_desire August 5 2011, 23:06:06 UTC

I'm glad you enjoy how I wrote the characters. ^^ Youngbae is a good friend, I wouldn't worry about him too much. Daesung is right about him not being able to stay mad for long. Hehe.

Thanks for reading, sugar.

scythegyen August 6 2011, 01:03:28 UTC

Usually in fics like this, the friend that gets mad like throne they're mad at, with you writing about Bae's religious upbringing, I'm very curious to see where you take this.

irm_cik August 5 2011, 19:38:51 UTC

ahahah best ch so far :D
i had so much fun reading this...wow ji :D that was manly me likey~
YB sure will come around...soon i hope
ooh hyunnie is in deep shit..but i think he'll(or they will with BB and ji) find a way out
plz update soon honey~

undying_desire August 5 2011, 23:07:54 UTC

I like manly Jiyong too. *Nods* Guess he got tired of the sexual frustration eh? =P Youngbae is nothing to worry about. He's Ji's best friend, of course he has to come around.

Only one way to find out how it all goes down, stay tuned for the next chapter. Hehe.