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Apr 23, 2011 21:22


Title: A Miscalculated Storm (Part 2/2)
Word Count: Roughly 1,800
Spoilers: ----
Rating: PG/PG13 for swears
Summary: John and Sherlock--- they don't talk, not for days. 
Disclaimer: Sherlock is ACD's & Sherlock BBC is the lovechild of Godtiss & The Moff.

Author's Notes: This is Read more... )

bbc!sherlock, help_japan

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undrscoredom2nd April 24 2011, 14:23:04 UTC
Thank you :3 Sorry for not getting it quite right, but I'm glad you still enjoyed it!

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fruguited April 24 2011, 14:14:01 UTC
i cannot believe i missed this yesterday. D: /flails

all i can say is, i told you this'll come out great. :D

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undrscoredom2nd April 24 2011, 14:26:28 UTC
Oh my god, hahaha, medyo nahihiya ako. Di ko alam na talagang sinusubaybayan mo pala to. XD Hindi ko pa kasi siya nilalagay sa comm, if that's what you're wondering. Thanks froe, glad you liked it~

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fruguited April 24 2011, 14:49:54 UTC
dude, i was waiting for this. :)) i wanted to know how they'd (kiss and) make-up in the end. :P

thank goodness i checked my "friends page" then, huh. :P

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undrscoredom2nd April 24 2011, 14:55:26 UTC
Sorry, kulang siya ng kiss. Next time na lang ;D

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jerel April 24 2011, 14:44:50 UTC
I liked this a lot. Very real and in character for both of them. I'm glad they resolved it. I hope you will write more in the future.

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r34dinglight April 24 2011, 17:52:24 UTC
to say I love this fic's conclusion is such an understatement on so many levels! really great lines that stopped me in my tracks! great in character dialogue! and it ended on the happy! all around, just lovely!

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hillshollow April 24 2011, 18:49:45 UTC
I enjoyed this.

John’s not perfect. Sherlock’s not a complete jerk. They’re both stubborn mules and John can match Sherlock obstinate for obstinate. They fight like regular people. This was really nice.

I liked the gradual over days thaw when they both kind of met in the middle in the end.

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undrscoredom2nd April 25 2011, 06:42:24 UTC
Ah, thanks so much!

I'm glad you see it like that too. I agree with you completely. I don't think John'll always be willing to forgive Sherlock/let him off the hook. I think it's mentioned in the book (or perhaps I've made it head canon, since Martin Freeman has it) that John can be temperamental and I wanted to see more fics dealing with this temper + Sherlock :'D

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