Comments | underthepines: I Can Only Make You Cry with these Words

underthepines

I Can Only Make You Cry with these Words

Aug 03, 2010 18:03

Pairing: Jaejoong/Yoochun
Length: Oneshot
Word Count: 2,180
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, AU
Warnings: Underage Drinking, Sex, Attempted Suicide
Summary: Yoochun and Jaejoong become best friends, except that's just not enough.
A/N: Just... Be nice about this fic. Title taken from Belle and Sebastian's "Get Me Away from Here, I'm Dying".

( A notebook is better company than people who think he’s not the same as they are. At least it has margins to draw in. )

pairing: jaejoong/yoochun, genre: angst, length: oneshot, rating: r, type: au

Comments 20

only4dbsk August 3 2010, 23:01:53 UTC

only4dbsk August 3 2010, 23:02:38 UTC

alright there's something wrong with my formatting thingy but you know <3333 LOVED IT! ^^

underthepines August 4 2010, 00:04:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that it had such a strong impact on you. I wrote this a while ago but didn't get around to smoothing it out a bit until now because it's a bit emotional for me, too.
I kinda liked the "&hearts" more than <3, tbh. They're sort of endearing^^

underthepines August 4 2010, 02:30:41 UTC

I meant that to come out as &heart... I didn't realize the quotes would make it a real heart!
I was saying that I liked just seeing &heart, not that I only like the fancy black hearts. SORRY!!

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jaedork August 3 2010, 23:48:10 UTC

oh the angst ♥

underthepines August 4 2010, 00:05:16 UTC

Yup^^
Thanks for reading and commenting!

poppy_sky August 4 2010, 00:38:17 UTC

I love angsty soulmates, that's the best kind there is ♥

I'm mem-ing because some lines hit pretty close to home and... I think I'll want to read this story again sometime in the future.

Great job!

underthepines August 4 2010, 00:42:23 UTC

IA. Otherwise, you have perfect shiny happy soulmates, and that's just unreal.
This story is in fact very personal, so I'm glad it resonated with you, too.
Thanks for reading and commenting (and mem-ing!)!

allysonmae18 August 4 2010, 04:37:17 UTC

WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! //sobs
Excuse me while I go chase after my heart. :((

underthepines August 4 2010, 04:42:17 UTC

Sorry! *catches your heart and hands it back*
This is kind of a true story (with some adjustments, of course), though, so don't hate me too much for it, alright?

allysonmae18 August 4 2010, 04:58:18 UTC

It is? Oh My Gosh. But darling, no matter how much it broke my heart. It's still beautiful.

I think I'm inlove with you. XDDDDDD

underthepines August 4 2010, 05:05:39 UTC

Yes, it is.

You're ridiculously sweet. You know, I've been meaning to add you as a friend for a while now but I keep forgetting. I think, now that you've confessed your love and all, I should probably get around to doing that lol.

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parangnabi August 4 2010, 11:20:54 UTC

you just break my heart apart why did you do this to them, just why?

underthepines August 4 2010, 15:21:57 UTC

Sorry! *glues heart back together*
Thanks for reading and commenting!