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For justlyra: Dominance

Nov 05, 2013 00:02

Title: Dominance
For: justlyra | lyra-rose
Pairing : Fernando Alonso/Felipe Massa
Rating: NC-17
Length: 659w
Summary: Felipe has had enough of being the second driver, pleasing Fernando all the time. Now he was getting out of Ferrari, it was his turn.

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for: justlyra, driver: massa, pairing: alonso/massa, driver: alonso, fic challenge: round 01

Comments 2

anonymous November 5 2013, 19:47:26 UTC

Thank you!! this is great. Love that Felipe got to be number one, but that he also knew it was a one time only thing! Lyra x

understeers November 14 2013, 06:54:02 UTC

the dynamic between felipe and fernando here was great, especially how felipe's acutely aware of how things are like! i like how you built it up from fernando's helplessness, leading to him relinquishing control to felipe and at the end, how the tone goes from heavy to lighter one.

thanks for writing :D