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For whisper_roar: I Just Walked In

Nov 04, 2013 01:08

Title: I Just Walked In
For: whisper_roar | perhapsillbeabird
Pairing: Jean-Eric Vergne/Jules Bianchi
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3537w
Summary: What happens when one roommate walks in on the other?

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driver: vergne, driver: bianchi, for: whisper_roar, pairing: bianchi/vergne, fic challenge: round 01

Comments 4

alt_reayoon November 3 2013, 22:58:01 UTC

Frenchies rich school boys AU! With Jules and Jean-Eric no less, the two of them are simply adorable.

"Over the next ten days Jules wanked over Jev no fewer than eleven times." Whoa Jules. But I suppose from the way Jean-Eric runs around enticing him, it's kind of a given.

And the smut was hot and sexy. Loved it.

runawaydomo November 4 2013, 05:44:37 UTC

damn, you write amazing smut and i will gladly read this again in school 8D

understeers November 4 2013, 07:53:49 UTC

As they both came down from the high they both knew two things for certain - Jules would be sore the next morning and they'd never return to being just roommates.

i really liked this line! it's kinda like a punch to the gut after all the hot sex between jules and jev, there's a shift in the relationship and they don't know where it's headed and it could be this long highway to hell, but what's done is done, and there's no changing it. i like how you set the fic up, there were details about how jev and jules came to know one another but it's painted in broad strokes so we can just imagine how it would've been like for them. the way jules' perception of jev changed was really great too, and i liked the way you built his frustration, and how it ended with him drawing jev's attention the same way he had noticed jev in the first place.

this was really great, thanks for writing! :D

whisper_roar November 4 2013, 19:53:15 UTC

WRITER I LOVE YOU. I CANNOT STOP READING THIS. THIS IS EVERYTHING I WANTED AND MORE, HOW ON EARTH DID YOU MANAGE TO DO THAT.
Right. Non-flaily bit. I love all the background stuff, learning about their relationship. Also I really like the idea of Jules sat there wanking off still wearing his socks and oh god I think I have a thing for toe curling. Help. Gosh, your smut is so utterly hot and delicious too. It does amuse me that they're like, privacy, no, let's wank off on the sofa instead!! ;D