What I Like About You Ch. 5: Colorful
“I cannot believe Mr. Harris gave you a D on that paper,” Mar’i spat as she nearly kicked open her bedroom door, Lian close behind her.
“Believe me, I know,” the red head rolled her eyes and closed the door, the essay in question clutched in her left hand.
“His reasoning was so convoluted too!” Mar’i grabbed the paper from her friend and read the ( Read more... )
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And no, I don't have any ideas, so this can go first. It should go first, God, being all happy and amazing and lovely and stuff. And I love that you used Robert (he's so awesome, and was incredibly cute during the whole Donna growing into Troia arc) and I wouldn't change him for the world.
Mar'i is perfectly in character, headstrong like her dad, and has his speech patterns. And Lian would write a paper about crime fighting, no complaints there. (And I squee once more for Robert.) Mar'i's joke was actually very side-splitting (::is still gasping for breaths::) so nothing there, either.
I'm still not sure if we're making Lian a red-head though. We might as well, she was one Pre-Crisis and is one in Kingdom Come, and I know her better that way. And we won't be confused. :)
Other than that, I pretty much love. We are now officially back in business! :)
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