[Supernatural] Those Wayward Sons Better Carry On

Jan 21, 2010 15:03

Castiel has found himself in desperate need of an archangel.  supernatural. castiel, gabriel. 4453 words. pg-13.

Written for allfireburns , since it was her prompt that inspired it. ....It got away from me.

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And I'm sorry as hell their Daddy's gone, but those wayward sons better carry on... )

character: castiel, fandom: supernatural, character: the trickster/gabriel

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alesca_munroe January 28 2010, 07:13:39 UTC
*gleeface* That was pretty cool. Also, the perspectives each angel has on the other and the how you wrote them as not being well-acquainted were refreshingly original. Most of the ones I've read have the two as once being very close.

Props and kudos all around

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kawaiispinel January 28 2010, 07:16:58 UTC
Hee! That's good to hear. XD I haven't read a lot of fic with them, since I'm primarily a gen writer/reader and there's just not a lot of it out there, so I'm happy to know I did something different and not something that's been done a million times. /overshares.

Thank you so much! <333

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nemo_r January 28 2010, 11:21:53 UTC
Love this, the battle scene was really good, and I really like the way you've delved into Gabriel's psyche, the casual devil-may-care attitude, hiding all the love he still has for his family.

Will you be continuing?

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kawaiispinel January 28 2010, 17:41:21 UTC
Hee! Thank you so much. <33

XD And I have no idea. I didn't set out too, but if I get a brilliant idea for a second part, I may have to.

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denazia January 28 2010, 13:49:22 UTC
Really truly excellent. A wonderful story beautiful told.

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kawaiispinel January 28 2010, 17:41:37 UTC
Thank you!

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mac_sh January 28 2010, 14:22:51 UTC
wow, awesome! me love it~ =) <3

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kawaiispinel January 28 2010, 17:42:01 UTC
Thanks! <33

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aescu January 28 2010, 15:07:39 UTC
He left because he hated the fighting. Anafiel Fell because she was bored and tired of it all. Castiel didn't so much fall as tripped over an ottoman and faceplanted into the carpet with absolutely no clue how the heck he got there.
I love the image ;D

Great characterization, a very entertaining story and a wonderful style of writing makes this an exceptional fic :)

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kawaiispinel January 28 2010, 17:42:22 UTC
Thank you so very much! ^^

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