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[uncouthkitten]

O.K. yet again with the "it's all virtualpersonal's fault she put out the idea, well that and the Victorian Sex Cry Generator which generated the first sentence of the prologue, then I played, (started to do a drabble) then this plot bunny came and bit my arse and wouldn't let go.

TITLE: The Licentious Secrets of Victorian Gentlemen of MeansAUTHOR:

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[incasink]

Will, breathing shallowly, chest heaving, lips red from gnawing them in annoyance, flushed from his exertions, and his vivid blue eyes, sparkling, pupils hugely dilated, all from the erotic sensation of being bound, very tightly, in ones clothes - looked absolutely edible.

*slowly raises eyebrow*

Well... Im interested. *coughs*

Ahem.

They had often shared a bed, talking quietly, into the night, trying not to wake the rest of the household, although as they grew older the naive touches and consoling cuddles provoked less innocent reactions. Then their amusements and role-plays of what they would do and say to the opposite sex also took a different turn.

Ahem. Very Ahem.

I dont quite care if it was inspired by the Victorian Sex Cry Generator... I do say I'm rather intrigued...

;)

On a more serious note, I've got to say I enjoy your flowing prose, not sure if you've created the old english rhythm just for this story or not, but it's lovably lyrical.

[uncouthkitten]

Thank you so much for commenting, I was so afraid that I'd made a complete pillock of myself, still not overly confident, but how much can you agonize over a bit of good natured smut? The story is a bit like my mind - just gets grubbier and smuttier as time goes on, hallelujah.

"On a more serious note, I've got to say I enjoy your flowing prose, not sure if you've created the old english rhythm just for this story or not, but it's lovably lyrical." Bless you, *comes over all hot and bothered*, hopefully it's inspired by the story - but it's probably that I'm old and english. But as my 98 year old great-auntie used to say, as she plonked herself down in the lap of a good looking young man and wriggled excitedly "You're only as old as the men that you feel." (I know Mae West said it first, but Auntie Lucy said it better.) Not that I feel quite ready to rush out and fondle a nice young man, quite yet.

[spankspike]

Oh yes - very intriguing! I'm picturing William in all of those corsets, I love him in a corset. He should wear one as often as possible, and then Liam shouldhelp him out of it quite slowly while I get to watch.

My only piece of con-crit - the chapters should be longer, much longer, soooo much longer! :-) Please write voluminous chapters of this one!

[uncouthkitten]

Thanks for the con-crit, I need all the help that I can get, think that the length of the chapters is directly proportionate to the writers reserves of confidence (three words and a comma for the next one then).;-)

Loved your Pretty Pantie Pony series, but wanted to think more on the human aspects, the restriction of breath, the binding and reshaping of the body and how that would affect the sexuality and psychology of the wearer, etc.

[spankspike]

Oh yes - plus your boys aren't vampires. My boys didn't have to be at all concerned about breathing, though I did explore the psychology of how wearing a corset made William feel feminine and Angelus identify him that way as well.

I am looking forward to more, which actually could already be up for all I know - because I just got home.

*hugs*

[uncouthkitten]

Up now, was petrified as it's the first properly grubby bit I've ever written, so if it sucks, and not in a good way, please be honest.

I wanted to explore the feelings of being bound in and reshaped, but in a totally non threatening way and not necessarily in a particularly feminine way, so while he's enjoying the restriction and the attention from Liam he's, hopefully, not coming over as "girly" or "butch" just randy.

[thatotherperv]

oh, I was thinking, you may also want to include a link to the victorian sex cry generator, and make it a little more clear that's where the first sentence came from, in the little intro both here and at DS when you put that up. I think that thing is hilarious, I saw it when virtualpersonal put it up as well.

[fanbot]

I normally don't go for cross dressing, but your discriptions have captivated me.
I await more.