Title: Let Me Be the One Who Treats You Right Author: unconditional_w Pairing: Naomi/Emily Summary: What she’s really trying to say. Rating: R for language.
If I dyed my hair red, if I wore all these colorful clothes, if I rode an orange moped while wearing goggles and If I asked you to be brave and told you I really really like you, would you marry me?
This was amazing. When you mentioned badass dialogue I thought you were going to write that badass dialogue... which you'd be really able to do. But then it was actually even better. Really great idea, this what they say and what they really mean. Because there's always so much more behind the words people use, right? At least most of the time. Other times people say things like be brave and want me back or you make me a better person or I Know or You're the only person who could ruin me... and that's all they mean. But most of the times there's more and I love how you went there. It was beautiful.
Not gonna lie: Yes. Yes I would. I really really would.
Tricky to choose the lines I wanted to elaborate on. Some of 'em really do speak for themselves, and I'd just word them differently and take away from the beautiful moment. So I just grabbed at the tiny ones that packed huge subtext. So glad you liked it :) Thanks for the comment.
That sounds about right :P They've got a great way of communicating I found the only other couple that rivals 'em being Freffy. But we don't talk about them.
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This was amazing. When you mentioned badass dialogue I thought you were going to write that badass dialogue... which you'd be really able to do. But then it was actually even better. Really great idea, this what they say and what they really mean. Because there's always so much more behind the words people use, right? At least most of the time. Other times people say things like be brave and want me back or you make me a better person or I Know or You're the only person who could ruin me... and that's all they mean. But most of the times there's more and I love how you went there. It was beautiful.
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Tricky to choose the lines I wanted to elaborate on. Some of 'em really do speak for themselves, and I'd just word them differently and take away from the beautiful moment. So I just grabbed at the tiny ones that packed huge subtext.
So glad you liked it :) Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks muchly for your read and comment, babes <3.
Loving the new icon.
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Thanks so much for your read and comment <3
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Thanks for leaving it, and giving it a read :)
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