What's terrible for me is that I can understand the emotions behind why Naomi cheated but I can't understand how she actually went through with it. There is nothing out of character about her being stupid and rash. I could have easily seen her running away again, but cheating? It just hurts me more than I could ever say
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Most Unnecessary Scene: Emily crying over Sophia's personal belongings at school.
This scene was...more than unnecessary, it was just confusing. Emily wasn't even way over her head with the whole Sophia thing when this happened. I don't understand. Was Emily just crying because she felt bad this random girl killed herself? (which is odd considering Emily had been so vehemently against getting involved with all of this beforehand) Or was she just crying because 'oh god, what have you done? what did you make Naomi do? what happened there? everything's ruined now and the only person who can clear it all up is gone' And evenso, that scene could have been placed a bit later, I find. Editing fail, skins I think in this scene Emily was crying because she'd just found out that Naomi HAD met Sophia before AND had been to an open day without her knowing about it, thinking that all was well in their plans to go traveling together. She thought that they were at a stage in their relationship where Naomi could tell her if she wanted to do
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That....that actually does make a lot of sense. I suppose. It just then seems to translate into concern for Emily's own story as opposed to Sophia's tragedy. Which in and of itself is interlinked, but at the time she didn't know that. And so she was sobbing for herself. Which just seems odd to do in front of someone who was so depressed she killed herself.
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Emily crying over Sophia's personal belongings at school.
This scene was...more than unnecessary, it was just confusing. Emily wasn't even way over her head with the whole Sophia thing when this happened. I don't understand. Was Emily just crying because she felt bad this random girl killed herself? (which is odd considering Emily had been so vehemently against getting involved with all of this beforehand) Or was she just crying because 'oh god, what have you done? what did you make Naomi do? what happened there? everything's ruined now and the only person who can clear it all up is gone' And evenso, that scene could have been placed a bit later, I find. Editing fail, skins I think in this scene Emily was crying because she'd just found out that Naomi HAD met Sophia before AND had been to an open day without her knowing about it, thinking that all was well in their plans to go traveling together. She thought that they were at a stage in their relationship where Naomi could tell her if she wanted to do ( ... )
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Which just seems odd to do in front of someone who was so depressed she killed herself.
But alas.
Alas you make a point :)
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*sob*
granted I don't think they were all that special. If anything they were the most fragile of all the couples. BUTIMEANstillNAOMICOMEON.
dammit.
FF this weekend, my friends! FF to the rescue.
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You've got the fluff and KFitch covered, I'm delving head first into the Campbell. I just need to understand.
Will probably write a KatieFierce fic at some point, yes. Because....goddammit, Naomi.
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