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The Girl with Flaxen Hair - Chapter Ten

Jan 13, 2011 15:30

As he succumbs to the illness that robbed him of his family, a lonely man finds solace in a dream...

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gigi_tastic January 13 2011, 20:59:17 UTC

BWHAHAHA. oh buffy. you done told him. poor boy. he isnt use to women much less strong assertive ones. *grins*

unbridled_b January 15 2011, 01:24:44 UTC

BWHAHAHA. oh buffy. you done told him. poor boy. he isnt use to women much less strong assertive ones. *grins*

lol. You can say that again! Poor boy has a lot of learning to do. ;)

gigi_tastic January 15 2011, 01:27:29 UTC

that he does. but buffy will teach him. shes very hands on .

louise39 January 13 2011, 21:13:11 UTC

He wondered if it meant something was wrong with him. Should not men prefer to subjugate women.
Spike in his 19th century way was thinking but he is dealing with Buffy now.

“Go home and stop being such a manipulative ass!”
And that last line was hilarious - just right for a thoroughly modern Buffy and a Spike who was showing a little too much self-pity.

unbridled_b January 15 2011, 01:54:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, particularly the last line. It was probably my favorite to write. :)

petzipellepingo January 13 2011, 21:22:00 UTC

Gotta love a Buffy who brings books from the 20th century to an already confused man from the 19th century...

And I love the last line.

unbridled_b January 15 2011, 01:56:29 UTC

Gotta love a Buffy who brings books from the 20th century to an already confused man from the 19th century...

Hee. She means well, but that definitely wasn't the most well thought out of plans.

And I love the last line.

I'm so glad. Thank you! :D

rebcake January 13 2011, 22:14:36 UTC

Hee! That's telling 'im. I felt for Cecily in this case, though I'm sure she will reverse my feeling when she displays her true colors.

unbridled_b January 15 2011, 02:01:59 UTC

I felt for Cecily in this case, though I'm sure she will reverse my feeling when she displays her true colors.

I'm glad you mentioned this, because I'm trying something a little different with Cecily. Usually, she's portrayed as, for lack of a better term, a straight-up bitch in fanfiction. I wrote her that way myself in FtTP. In this story, I wanted to flesh her out and make her more of a three dimensional character instead of a villain.

beloved_77 January 13 2011, 22:43:12 UTC

“Stop being such a manipulative ass and go home!”

*snicker*

unbridled_b January 15 2011, 02:02:36 UTC

Glad you enjoyed that. ;)