Into the Hall of the Mountain King by landofthekwt

Sep 30, 2009 13:54

Title: In the Hall of the Mountain King
Author: lanofthekwt
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 9 Always Wondered What This’d be Like
Word Count: 2896
Warning: None
Summary: Inuyasha and Rin attend the presentation of the heir at the Western Shiro
Chapeter 3 of Left Behind (Inuyasha/Rin, Sesshoumaru/Kagome)

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luxken27 October 2 2009, 01:15:29 UTC
*sniff* This is all so bittersweet. It's good to see Jaken again (LOL! he never catches a break!), and its nice to see Inuyasha and Rin growing closer. So she has a little crush on him, eh? Ah, the best laid plans...

hose who knew protocol knew that Japanese tradition called for the declaration of an heir only on the occasion of the child’s eighteenth birthday. The Imperial Family had set the standard four hundred years before. The nobility slavishly followed this tradition. Why would Sesshoumaru break such a tradition? His heir was a hanyou. His mate was a human. All unprecedented in Japanese and inyoukai history.

First of all ~ nice history lesson! ;) Second of all - wow, Sesshoumaru is whipped, if he's letting Kagome walk all over him and dictate everything! I wonder if he fears for his son's place in the court, or for his son's life. What other reason would he have to break tradition like this?

Kagome handed her son to Inuyasha. He did not bite. The baby was still sleeping despite the shower. It was his nephew. His flesh ( ... )

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landofthekwt October 2 2009, 17:39:05 UTC
Thanks. Inuyasha is serving as a substitute for Sesshoumaru whom Rin still has puppy love for. Most married men are whipped. If Sesshoumaru loved Kagome enough to mate her and not just rape her I would expect him to bow to her wishes.

I have not decided about the next installment. Originally the koi pond was supposed to take place during the ceremony with IY being sent out to search for Rin.

I love beating up on Jaken. He is just such a smuck that I cannot help it.

I am trying to create a base for a relationship in her middle teen years. Some of the reviews want me to move things along for romance. I like the open friendly Rin who reaches out to IY.

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luxken27 October 3 2009, 00:53:50 UTC
If Sesshoumaru loved Kagome enough to mate her and not just rape her I would expect him to bow to her wishes.

You expect that he'd just fold his cards, just like that? Interesting!

I love beating up on Jaken. He is just such a smuck that I cannot help it.

LMAO, you're not the only one! :D He's my favorite character to employ for comic relief. So put upon, but such a masochist all in the same breath :P

I am trying to create a base for a relationship in her middle teen years. Some of the reviews want me to move things along for romance. I like the open friendly Rin who reaches out to IY.

Yes, I saw the reviews over at FF.net (and looks like you've found an audience - kudos!). I personally like the plan you seem to have, to give them common ground and then allow the friendship/relationship to grow from there. Hopefully your other readers will be just as patient :)

BTW, here is the banner I made ~ I hope you like it!


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landofthekwt October 5 2009, 14:31:02 UTC
Thanks for the great banner. I think in a marriage that Sesshoumaru would be willing to accede certain points to Kagome if he did not think them critical to their relationship

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