Challenge - Drabble - Experience

[umi_yagami]

One experience for jun_yumemakura 
I honestly had no idea what th do with this one o.o

Title: Experience
Part: 1/1
Fandom: Colin, Jared
Rating/Warnings: None
Words: 200
Cast: Colin, Jared
Summary: Jared could never have what he wanted. Never ever
Disclaimer: "Not true never happened. You'd think with all that's going on in the world people wouldn't be so concerned with

Comments

[enchantr]

GOOD!!!! See, you didn't need me after all. :)

[bloodykisses89]

I've always thought I need a beta, just to make sure there aren't any mistakes since english is not my first language D:
I'm glad you thougt it was good :3

[cujlover]

So, here in your drabble, Jared's often the replaceable love in stock, huh?
Colin's the bad guy here. Play with Jared's feelings...?
But on the other hand if Jared's used to always get what he wants, then maybe we count this as a....so to say...payback?

Although, I enjoyed your drabble. :))

C

[bloodykisses89]

well not exactly, he just never gets there in time when Colin is single, so yeah XD

Glad you enjoyed it :3

[cujlover]

Ok, that's another point of view!
The more acceptable, perhaps.

[bloodykisses89]

Indeed ;D

[legolastariel]

Very good - love it. I like the way Jared's heart and mind pull him back and forth - his mind says no, yet his heart says yes. And the heart won! Way to go, Jared. It may indeed be worth taking the risk. Good job! :))

[bloodykisses89]

They say there's no win if there's no risk :P

[fatima_alegra]

Nya i think we need continue of this little story, better with hot NC. XD

[bloodykisses89]

With hot WHAT? o_O

[fatima_alegra]

Erm, that is rating NC-17 *lol*

(Fatima-Alegra)

[bloodykisses89]

Oh, okay, I get it now XD

[jun_yumemakura]

Yay! Go Jared go!!!

[bloodykisses89]

Yay! :D
I love that icon *-*