Challenge - Drabble - Cause and Effect

May 06, 2010 17:04

Only one Cause and Effect for jun_yumemakura cuz my brain is dry XD Don't even know if it's really cause and effect o.o

Title: Cause and Effect
Part: 1/1
Fandom: Jared/Colin
Rating/Warnings: Nope o.o
Words: 200!
Cast: Jared, Colin
Summary:Sometimes we should just SHUT UP
Disclaimer: "Not true never happened. You'd think with all that's going on in the world people ( Read more... )

challenge, colin/jared, word, drabble, prompt, series: pop! goes my heart!

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jun_yumemakura May 7 2010, 00:46:30 UTC
Nhooooooo!

You definitely need to write a sequels.

casue - Jared leaving
effect - Colin regretting

cause - Colin proposing
effect - happy together

See? You need at least two more stories.

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umi_yagami May 7 2010, 03:24:30 UTC
We still have friday, I might do something about it hehe

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too_beauty May 7 2010, 00:50:30 UTC
Ooops there goes Colin and his big mouth!
Of course it is a cause-effect drabb le and a very sensitive one!
I agree with my dear Jun, you need at least those two more she mentioned before.

sleep tight, little sis!
xo

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umi_yagami May 7 2010, 03:33:16 UTC
I might work on it if I am persuaded enough hehehe

Nah, I'll work on it right now XD

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fatima_alegra May 7 2010, 06:18:42 UTC
O_o oh no! There must be siquel!

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umi_yagami May 7 2010, 16:04:35 UTC
There is a sequel :3

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cujlover May 7 2010, 07:24:33 UTC
Does it work, if I beg you...in spanish, maybe?

Me gusta el cuento corto!
Yo suplico a un secuela, o tambien dos secuelas!
Por favor!!!!!

(omg, my spanish is terribly bad)

Gracias de antemano!
*besos y abrazos*
c

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legolastariel May 7 2010, 13:00:12 UTC
Mir kommt's definitiv Spanisch vor ... :-)

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cujlover May 7 2010, 20:07:52 UTC
¡Hola, Tariel!

¡Muchos gracias por mis conocimientos del español!
(Vielen Dank für das Kompliment wegen meiner Spanischkenntnisse)

¡Qué detalle! *blush*
( Das ist ja nett von dir!)

xoxo
c

Btw, still not so sure of this :-)!

*hugs you, poor thing, hope things will go better with you, soon!!!

Maybe it will help, to fucus your view on the 1st day you're completely free of all sorts of oppointments...?
Sometimes I got similar problems!
But I'm a day dreamer sometimes! And these are the days, I'm dreaming myself far away wherever I want to be, right then and there! Ireland...Greece...
Alone...for sure!!!

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umi_yagami May 7 2010, 15:37:03 UTC
Your spanish is good *Hugs*

And there IS a sequel, but I haven't posted it yet, I still have all day today, the week isn't over yeeeet :3

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legolastariel May 7 2010, 12:58:05 UTC
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! What is it this week?! Why is everybody doing this to me?! No wonder I feel like shit. First the girl who wrote the *Morocco trilogy* makes her comeback and presented the most depressing piece of story I've ever come across. Then I just read Kleemoon's four drabbles to this prompt and they were ALL of them sad and now you too! Is this depression week!? And what do you mean *no warnings* in your header - it should have said the story was sad. Boo-hoo. :-(

Sorry, I'm close to tears now. This is just all too much. Nicely written, deary, but I expect a sequel to this. You are not gonna leave it like this, right?

Damn, I need a happy story now. Something funny, something fluffy ... Guess you just feel crappy at the moment, too, huh? Then that was the cause that effected this story. Great, guess there are a lot more *causes and effects* here than what is IN the stories.

Feel better soon, hon, and write something funny!

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umi_yagami May 7 2010, 15:44:29 UTC
I thought you didn't LIKE crossdressed Jared o_o

But I'm really glad you liked this one hehe And if it made you close to tears, then I'm doing my job XD

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legolastariel May 7 2010, 19:46:03 UTC
I don't like crossdressed Jared, but funny I didn't even realize you were refering to a dress with the walking birthday cake. There have been so many jokes about the pink ... er, pomegranate hawk that I thought you were aiming at that. Doesn't really matter - it IS sad and the sequel still doesn't put it right, so now I'm waiting for part three tomorrow. ;-)

And what IS your job? Making me feel shitty? Oh, good, thanks a lot ...

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umi_yagami May 8 2010, 03:22:31 UTC
Sequel is gonna be posted RIGHT NOW :3 *Runs to post sequel*

Am I making you kinda like crossdressed Jared with this little number?

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