for flamika: sixth request fic ("Voices in the Dark")

[umadoshi]

First, before I forget to mention it again: Adam Stephanides has updated his blog with translation notes comparing the original Japanese text in Furuba vol. 12 with the Tokyopop translation. As usual, they've made some odd changes here and there; the post is very good reading. ^_^

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Filling flamika's request for a piece involving Rin and Yuki--the

Comments

[flamika]

Lovely! I liked it lot--it was everything I imagined a Rin and Yuki fic should be. ^^ I love how she's so spiky with him.

[umadoshi]

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it, after all the fuss I made. ^^

[snapdragon76]

T_T

I hope, that perhaps over time, Rin might be able to soften somewhat and perhaps open up a little more. It hurts in a way the way she pushes everyone away... except for Haru. And I totally realize it's not her fault for the bristliness she has around her. It's her only defense really. Words are her weapon. A part of me aches everytime when I see her react the way she does, wanting to put a salve on her wounds so that they can perhaps start to heal...

[kawaiiayu]

Ne, I forgot how long its been since I've read a fic by you! Lovely as always my dear :3 I love the interactions between Rin and Yuki, and of course Rin and Haru :3

[sleepdebtfairy]

Rin and Yuki are so weird together. ^^ This illustrated that well. I think it's a lot more interesting that Takaya made Rin dislike Yuki for a completely different reason than what most people would think. (jealousy over Haru) Adding to memories~!

[scarlet_avatar]

Very, very nice. ^_^

The Rin/Yuki relationship is so perfectly illustrated and you really see an uglier side to Rin's personality: she can be a bitch. Love the contrast of her relations with Yuki and Haru...and i adore your Haru- so very sexy.