Comments | ultra_chrome: Prompt #9 Jealousy.

ultra_chrome

Prompt #9 Jealousy.

Apr 09, 2007 23:28

Firstly, I'd just like to say that I seem to have gotten one of those Real Life things I hear so much about and it's leaving me pretty short on time, so I'm very behind on my reading. I promise to catch up soon.

Title: Observations
Pairing: F/K surprise surprise!
Rating: PG for language.
Word Count: 611
Notes: Ummm….I used all my words on the ( Read more... )

kowalski, fraser, rating:pg, slashfic, due south

Comments 23

tealc_spoo April 9 2007, 16:08:51 UTC

wow, this was cool.

ultra_chrome April 11 2007, 16:24:02 UTC

hee! Thank you. :)

sharon28 April 9 2007, 17:24:17 UTC

LOL. I don't recall ever seeing those letters used like that on a fanfic. (On poems yes, not fanfic though). Excellent work:)

ultra_chrome April 11 2007, 16:28:00 UTC

haha, well that's the fun thing about not really knowing the rules of writing. You can do anything!

I'm so pleased it worked for you. :)

mickeymvt April 9 2007, 17:40:17 UTC

Very ingenious and yes, Ray is SOOOO jealous, Fraser must pounce now.

ultra_chrome April 11 2007, 16:31:23 UTC

I think he's going to ask Ray if he'd like pizza for dinner and suggest they go to Ray's place to eat it. only the pizza will get cold...or Dief will eat it while they're busy...

sam80853 April 9 2007, 17:52:54 UTC

Oh, Fraser learnt quite a bit during this case ::grins::.

ultra_chrome April 11 2007, 16:32:44 UTC

Yep, he's a quick study. :)

spuffyduds April 10 2007, 00:47:54 UTC

Oh,well done indeed! ::claps::

ultra_chrome April 11 2007, 16:49:22 UTC

Thank you thank you!!!