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Prompt #3. Secret Lives.

Apr 03, 2007 23:53

Title: Old Friends.
Pairing: Fraser/Smithbauer
Rating: Very light R. Implied stuff.
Word Count: 599
Notes: I committed Smithbauer. I console myself by remembering that Fraser didn't know RayK back then. Plus, you just know something happened when Mark stayed over. Just don't tell my Grandmother I came home and wrote this after dinner at her place, ( Read more... )

rating:r, fraser, smithbauer, slashfic, due south

Comments 22

mergatrude April 3 2007, 22:54:26 UTC

Eeeeeeeee! Lovely! I was kind of secretly hoping we'd get some Smithbauer out of this prompt, so you WIN!

ultra_chrome April 4 2007, 16:36:19 UTC

\O/ Woohoo!

Oh, wait. Does that mean I win at being predictable? Oh, who cares. I win at something!

vsee April 4 2007, 00:55:21 UTC

I've always had secret glee about Fraser's possible past with Mark, and I can't really watch the scene in his apartment in the episode without practically hearing the cheesy porn music starting up in my head. It's *such* a set up. So it makes me so very happy to see that scene moved along properly, instead of getting all tangled with hockey and criminals. (I imagine the hockey and criminals after this.) Anyway, this was cool, and sexy. I love Fraser all fucked out and relaxed, anyway he gets there. Fun story!

ultra_chrome April 4 2007, 16:39:09 UTC

Me too. The whole thing is so laid out for me, especially since they suddenly get more comfortable around each other after Mark spends the night. Playful and everything. *happy sighs*

nobelnomis April 4 2007, 03:20:52 UTC

Wow Grandma should have you to dinner more often. Great work, and very enjoyable even for this DS novice.

ultra_chrome April 4 2007, 16:42:10 UTC

Once a week is enough. I'm getting fatter as it is. :p

But....*points* YOU commented on dS fic!!!!

*does the dance of joy*

Happy making stuff! I have arrived.

nos4a2no9 April 4 2007, 03:55:48 UTC

I loved this. I wrote Smithbauer into my rentboy epic of WOE and it took me 5,000words to do what you did in less than 300. There was some terrific interplay here, and I loved the discussion about their pasts and the way the future plays out in unfair and uncertain ways. Lovely stuff.

ultra_chrome April 4 2007, 16:46:54 UTC

You have rentboy fic? Where? *squees*

*remembers feedback*
Thanks, I had a wee struggle to keep it from getting too wordy. Hell, a big struggle. I am the queen of wordiness, usually, so I'm beyond happy that it worked for you. :)

viciouscats April 8 2007, 02:13:48 UTC

YAY! I love it to bits. There should definitely be more Fraser/Smithbauer in this fandom! :)

ultra_chrome April 8 2007, 16:23:42 UTC

:D Yes, there should.