I've finally read "Territory", took me long enough. I've been needing a fic fix and this gave me the 'high' I was searching for. I've said it many times but I'll say it again - good porn requires good characterization. If I can't keep the characters in mind the entire time when reading, it loses me and ultimately bores me. I had no problem seeing Fraser and Ray - reading this was like watching a movie - effortless. I wish other writers could do it like you do - with the understanding that porn is both hot and fun when there's a touch of humor in it. The whole thing with Ray's flirting bringing out the wolf in Fraser - there you go, it does it all. I loved this.
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Oh yeah, bite me Frase, anytime. ;)
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You have said it many times. Thank goodness, because I think it's finally starting to sink in. :)
Whenever I'm writing the naughty bits I get you in my head, saying things like, "Who's leg is that?" and "Would he really say that?"
You have no idea how much longer you make the writing process. :p
But better, for sure.
And Ray agrees with your last comment. :)
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