dead and lovely: one
DEAD AND LOVELY: ONE
1617 words, PG-13/possibly M
myungzy, romance/supernatural
( There’s a ghost in my room and her name is Suzy. Sometimes, if the sun is really high and the rays of light create yellow patterns in my room, I can see her clearly. She sits by the window, obliterating my view of the city’s high rises, like a washed out, gauzy mannequin. )
1617 words, PG-13/possibly M
myungzy, romance/supernatural
( There’s a ghost in my room and her name is Suzy. Sometimes, if the sun is really high and the rays of light create yellow patterns in my room, I can see her clearly. She sits by the window, obliterating my view of the city’s high rises, like a washed out, gauzy mannequin. )
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/adds to memories because the feel for myungzy in this is very... lovable/
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Anyway, I'm very intrigued by this and am interested to see how it will progress, especially if you plan to have higher-rated content in it. I definitely think that you got Myungsoo's personality across, and extremely well, at that. You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion.
I also just have to mention : the art is absolutely gorgeous as well.
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this is one amazing comment, it made my night :) i feel like i still have to brush up my writing, but thank you. ♥ You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion. FEELS THANK YOU! dsjkhdfjhfd you're wonderful. and hopefully i'll manage to keep it interesting for you guys :) yes, i'm planning some mature content, but we'll still see.
and thank you again! :3
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