I really like this fic, so delicate, calm, I could imagine every detail while I was reading, it was unique ♥ words and my not so perfect English can't explain what I really want to write :'(
I so love your writing; it just has such a unique and lovely quality to it. It's almost childlike, but I mean that in a good way... like, it makes you feel the same sort of simplicity and wonder that you felt as a child.
Anyway, I'm very intrigued by this and am interested to see how it will progress, especially if you plan to have higher-rated content in it. I definitely think that you got Myungsoo's personality across, and extremely well, at that. You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion.
I also just have to mention : the art is absolutely gorgeous as well.
this is one amazing comment, it made my night :) i feel like i still have to brush up my writing, but thank you. ♥ You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion. FEELS THANK YOU! dsjkhdfjhfd you're wonderful. and hopefully i'll manage to keep it interesting for you guys :) yes, i'm planning some mature content, but we'll still see.
this is so beautifully written and just i love it so much. i could envision everything perfectly and it has a light airy very relaxing feel. like the kind of story you just want to read curled up with a mug of something hot and a warm blanket. me gusta. i love your characterization of suzy as a ghost here. and the joke she cracked at the end ! :) so simple but so well done. i honestly don't even know where this pairing came from but man i can ship it.
i'm so glad i managed to get that airy feel correctly hahahah. that was what i was aiming for, so i'm happy! and awwwn, your description is lovely dmhdfjhdf thank you ♥ SHIP IT WITH ME BB, BOARD OUR SHIP~!
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/adds to memories because the feel for myungzy in this is very... lovable/
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Anyway, I'm very intrigued by this and am interested to see how it will progress, especially if you plan to have higher-rated content in it. I definitely think that you got Myungsoo's personality across, and extremely well, at that. You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion.
I also just have to mention : the art is absolutely gorgeous as well.
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this is one amazing comment, it made my night :) i feel like i still have to brush up my writing, but thank you. ♥ You do 'show, not tell' so effortlessly and that's one of the signs of a great writer, in my opinion. FEELS THANK YOU! dsjkhdfjhfd you're wonderful. and hopefully i'll manage to keep it interesting for you guys :) yes, i'm planning some mature content, but we'll still see.
and thank you again! :3
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