"Onew"

[uknowmaname]

Title : Not A Simple Fairy Tale - 1/?
Author : uknowmaname
Pairing : Key/Onew-Jinki
Genre(s) : Romance, Drama, Humor
Rating : G-PG
Warning : Top!Key, Bottom!Onew, Mpreg (Can deal and stand with those?)
Summary : Not in every life and love stories are as simple as the fairy tale but they know, they can make one...

A/N: Onkey's past story, I decided to make another

Comments

[keytimes]

Spot?

[keytimes]

Why Onew is all adorable and cute and precious and... *hugs him*
Oh, their first meeting, I was like 'crap, why Key seemed so mean on the canteen?'
But noo~~ He himself just wanted to help Jinki, and yes Kibummie, Jinki's eyes eventhough they are so small they look so astounding and warm.
How will their relationship go? Because Kibum acted like an umma, not like people attracted to the other.
Well, nice chapter. now give me the next part!!!!

[uknowmaname]

Your comment makes me want to break my keyboard

Because he IS Onew!!!
Key's not mean but 'nagging' LOL
yet he's a caring and loving person!! <3

Their relationship... hm.. you'll know on next chapter!!
well, being 'Umma' just an excuse for him
psst...I'll tell you one thing, "Your tongue..."

I think I'll update it the day after tomorrow beside that day I'll take holidays~ woohoo~~

Key, thanks for always supporting me!! *hug you*

[keytimes]

I hope I can be patient. *hugs you back*
Holiday? Here I am terrified by UNAS and SNMPT and you can take a holiday? What's the occasion bb?

[marupekopeko]

aigoo...
jinki umma, why are you so cute...

i'm curious how they become a lover..
there'll be double update today?
can't wait... hehehe..
fighting!!

[uknowmaname]

Jinki umma?
I LOVE THAT SOUND!!
This chapter's way too cheesy, right?

They'll become a couple... next chapter, it'll kind fast...!
Cream cake kisses!!
Double update? that's what I wanted but I don't know I can do that or not...
But I'll try my best!

Thanks for reading and your comment!
Fighting too~

[anselson]

you said you failed? man its so cute! I wanna squeeze your story and you XD
I cant stop giggling~
innocent yet pabo Jinki is so cuteeeeeeee, I wanna pinch his fat cheeks :D
update asap ^^

[uknowmaname]

Really? Oh, thank Goodness!!
because it's way too OOC and cheesy so I thought I was failed
you want to squeeze me? Then I'll squeeze you back~

Innocent yet babo?
I love your words!
I know right? no one can resist those fat cute cheeks!!

anyway, thank you so much!
GBU~

[princesalunar]

this is too cute =3 I love onkey and is kinda strange to read Onew like the uke but I really like your story so I'll be here waiting for the updates ^^

[uknowmaname]

[princesalunar]

yeah is very strange to read bottom-onew, but this is so lovely that I can't ignore it xD I love the plot of the fic, so you have here a fan of this history =3 I usually don't read incomplete fics because I have no patient but I couldn't do that with this fic and here you have me waiting for more LOL plus onew will be the cutest mom ever and key will be a great father like in HB =)

[uknowmaname]

I want to cry rainbow reading your comment, really...

I don't really know what to say beside thanks for liking my story!!
I thought people would ignore or dislike it since Onew is the submissive one but glad there are some peoples like you here to like it ^^, thanks

Yeah, Onew will be the cutest and loving mommy
and kibum will be the greatest father and a bit umma-ish

I'm so touched reading your comment ^^

[ext_692528]

I LOVE THIS!!
Onew is pregnant my f******** ............!!
I had been searching for prego!Onew but it's so hard to find one
& also love bottom!Onew, when I read Onew fics and then it came the smut part and Onew is the top & stop reading because for me top!Onew is a totally NO!
I love top!Key it's just amazing!

[uknowmaname]