Dawn Breaks

[noncommital_29]

Title: Dawn Breaks
Pairing: Soohyun/Kiseop
Rating: G
Summary: Soohyun wakes up at dawn and finds Kiseop perfect. Really short one-shot.

Comments

[silverstorm666]

I think this deserves one big "Awwwwwwww!" So fluffy and adorable! :D And Kiseop is ethereally beautiful. But often I find him most beautiful when he's not trying to be, as opposed to when he's attempting to look cute and stuff. Times when he's just caught up in thought, or when he finds something really amusing and a smile just starts to light up his face.

I was having a really crappy day so far, so thanks for posting this! It definitely made me smile.

[noncommital_29]

:D Thank you! I'm glad it made your day a bit better. Maybe somebody will oblige with some Soojae smut to make it even better? *wiggles eyebrows*

I just cannot make myself give them any angst. I just can't. Even if I start out thinking I might, it just all turns into fluff.

Kiseop is really beautiful, that face is perfect. I wasn't going to pair them, really, they just did it themselves.

And I am sorry you read that before I reread it properly - spread newspapers on the 'flour' indeed, I think I was already thinking of pancakes. :/ Fixed now, though.

[silverstorm666]

LOL @ that first comment. :D Hopefully there will be some. Hehe

I have the opposite problem when I write. I start out trying to make the fic all fluffy and somehow it turns into angst. :P

[noncommital_29]

I went stalking your fic today, (not in a creepy way. I guess.) and you're great at angst. Like, eyes all wet and blurry kind of angst.

I guess fluff will be a piece of cake when you get the right hook and the characters cooperate by not getting into the kind of trouble they can't get out of!

[pearlfuchsia]

This is absolutely adorable ;3; hehe, it made me happy to see them spend their free day mostly sleeping~ You take advantage of rest as often as you can.
But he knew how much strength was in him, too. Strong, sensitive, steadfast - he was all that and so much more.
I really love this line because that's what I see too. ;w;

Short and sweet, I like it a lot! Your writing is very good ^^ ♥

[noncommital_29]

Thank you for reading. :) I'm glad you liked it!

They do seem to work all the time, don't they? Sometimes they look so tired even with all the makeup.

And I feel bad that Kiseop is underrated. I think he'd surprise people with his strength if something went wrong.

I'll attempt something longer soon! Thank you again.

[pearlfuchsia]

They really do @_@ last year was just nonstop for them. Sadly rest is something they have to sacrifice in their line of work :/

I don't necessarily think he's underrated - to me he's more underestimated by people that don't bother to dig deeper and learn about him. Kiseop's often quiet and reserved (I mean the others joke about how he'll only speak 100 words a day), but when he isn't that's when his 4D side comes out. And with his good looks, people just take what they see at face value. I agree with you, I think he has a very strong character and that this side of him shows when it has to. He's capable of handling serious matters well and he'll be there to support others that need a shoulder to cry on.
orz sorry about that, I ramble a lot when it comes to him lol

I'll look forward to it! ^^

[noncommital_29]

hehe Weird but perfect, that's our Kiseop. :D