Burned Love

Dec 11, 2009 11:24

Burned Love
♥ DBSK - Yunho/Jaejoong; NC17; Romance Angst Drama;
beauty is in the eyes of the beholder

plot bunny by: tvxq_luv thank you my dear =)
banner: my lovely , lovely sesshy18 (ilysfm sam =D ( Read more... )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, genre: romance, title: burned love, rating: nc-17, length: 04, genre: angst

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yuki_3 December 11 2009, 22:20:41 UTC
Joongie T^T .. OMG I love him .. and feel so sad for him .. it is really horrible how people talk without knowing anything.. telling lies and spreading rumors..

but Yunho T^T .. such a lovely guy .. he will make a change .. and i just want to know how ..

I LOVE this story .. i was like "OMG she updated T^T.. runs to read" ..

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 03:38:20 UTC
;~; i know bb ♥ jaejoong is aldjfalfjaoe
but yunho will help yes yes? :D omg thank you bb!
i'm so glad you like this story ;=; it doesn't deserve
this much love but i'm so grateful it is :D

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ting5 December 11 2009, 23:45:58 UTC
*cries for Jae* it seems Yunho is the only one capable of saving Jae from his mother and from himself...

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 03:39:01 UTC
/hands you tissue ♥
don't cry bb ;=;
things will get better for jae~

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anael777 December 12 2009, 00:08:49 UTC
ohh my dearest how I missed this fic!!!
you have to update sooner next time >..<"
I love the way Jaejoongs mind works!!!
how he hates himself and yet he feels purified by mere touch of Yunho's hand!!!
ahh fantastic!!!
I really really really need to see them together!! I dooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *doe eyes*
and I love Yunho's talk with his mother XD she should kick his hot cute ass for teasing Jae X3

*hugs you*

I NEEDS MOARRRRR!!!!

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 03:56:53 UTC
D: I'M SO SORRY
when was my last update again? november 22? D:
aw man that's too long~ /doesnt do math
I NEED SOME YUNJAE ACTION TOO ;=;
that's why i promise promise promise that next chapter
there'll be a lot okay? okay :D ♥ /hugs
thank you so much bb!

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anael777 December 12 2009, 14:24:03 UTC
ohhh ohh ohh can't wait!! *anxious*
I really love the story!!
and I sooo wonder how will it all turn out!! I hope Jaejoongie can learn that he really is beautiful no matter what!! >.<'
and Yunho!! you better love and take good care of this broken angel or I'll break your legs >..<'

now I'll go take my valium and everything will be allright ne? XD

*hugs you so vary much*

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 23:16:28 UTC
/hugs LOL okay so yunho fixes jaejoong or else he'll be broken too? ♥
you're really funny bb :]

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dancingdeviant December 12 2009, 00:52:49 UTC
I want to compliment you, but you're supposed to be my rival.
Nice comment: I LOVED IT AND THIS WAS SO AMAZING AND OMG DO YOU SEE A GLOMP COMING YOUR WAY? I DO. 1 - 2 - 3........ARGGHHH Pure pwnage.
I love Yunho's mom more then i love......i don't know. She's amazing, and if i new how she looked, dayum. Loved the chapter.

Rival's comment: Yo. I mean, you're supposed to be my rival because we both love Chun. But forrealz, it needs to end. You don't even bring him up in your fics. I'm disappointed, yet relieved that the war has finally come to an end. It was fun while it lasted though. <3

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 04:00:22 UTC
LOL yeah chun's not going to be in this story :/
idek how to keep min in it anymore much less chun.
i also don't even know how i'm going to continue with this story
D: I HAVE TO BRAINSTORM SOME IDEAS BECAUSE I'M LOSING THEM QUICKLY!!!!
♥ LOL A GLOMP FROM YOU? OH HEAVEN'S NO, THERE MUST BE AN APOCALYPSE! /glomps you back either way XD thanks so much pal :) glad you liked it.

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jaesarang December 12 2009, 03:01:04 UTC
Yay you've updated! ((:
I've been waiting and so eager to read,
guess i must have miss it so much, haha~ ♥♥♥

Poor jae, the negative feelings are getting to him,
its so heart-breaking the way he sees himself.
Now i really want them(yunjae) to be together soon,
so yunho can take all his pain away!

Oh hey, haha, the question on top,
I don't think you're portraying Jaejoong too unemotional,
i'm not much a writer, but i think you're doing great,
cause i can really feel the angst, the pain, etc. when i read this. <3

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chunfacebiased December 12 2009, 04:12:49 UTC
i'm so sorry for the long delay bb ;=;
i'm such a horrible author /cries
lol yunjae is coming up so soon it's crazy
because i'm going to try and end this story at 10 chapters :D
♥ thank you so much bb for answering the question above
i really needed to just make sure :DD
and thanks again for reading&commenting ♥ :) /hugs

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jaesarang December 13 2009, 13:13:26 UTC
Its ok, its worth the wait! (:
And you're not horrible, you're a great writer!

Awwwh 10 chapters?
Thats so so soon to the end, i don't want it to end so quick,
love this fic so much! ♥♥♥

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chunfacebiased December 14 2009, 16:37:08 UTC
:'D my head = fat now because of your compliments
great, now i gotta work out my head.
do you know any head exercises? :D LOL /dies at the thought

ye ;~; but idk how i'm going to draw this story out any farther D:
don't worry, it'll be 6 amazing chapters left! ♥
/not too sure anyways if it's going to end in 10 chapters.
that's just my goal.

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