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Dec 12, 2007 21:48

Title: my heart in your hands
Fandom: Bourne movies
Spoilers: The Bourne Ultimatum, but set right before The Bourne Supremacy
Summary: how could I forget you? you're the only person I know.

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svilleficrecs December 13 2007, 03:11:40 UTC
*flails* OH MARIE! *hugs both of them so hard*

This was lovely and sharp and sweet. :)

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uhmidont December 17 2007, 14:16:38 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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dick_grayson December 13 2007, 03:44:43 UTC
Just beautiful. This line? -- "Of herself, so desperate and alone she would give a stranger who drew back from police sirens like they were meant for him a ride." So perfect.

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uhmidont December 17 2007, 14:16:46 UTC
Thank you so much!

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fearlessfan December 13 2007, 22:26:39 UTC
As you know, I LOVE THIS! I'm so glad you posted!! I love all of it but this section in particular:

That's the scary thing about love. She's always been careful with it, always edged around it (look at her grandmother, ending up all alone, look at the wreck of her parents) but Jason surprised her. She didn't know what to do with someone who knew only her. Who looked at her like she could save him. Like she had saved him.

She's always been able to travel light, but now, with him, it's even easier. All she has to carry is her heart and he watches over it so well. So carefully.

so amazing. YOU ARE AWESOME!

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uhmidont December 17 2007, 14:17:00 UTC
You are AWESOME! And thank you :-)

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imogenics December 13 2007, 23:55:05 UTC
This was wonderful. I love how you capture the instant of possessiveness as being so natural, the instant her approach to his remembering changes. I never really thought about how much power Marie had in their relationship, but it's there in that one line: "You're the only person I know."

Wonderful stuff, as always.

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uhmidont December 17 2007, 14:17:45 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely--and kind--words!

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sinensiss December 16 2007, 10:05:09 UTC
oh, so good and heartbreaking.

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uhmidont December 17 2007, 14:17:53 UTC
Thank you!

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