Comments | uebo14: A Song For The Lonely [shou/hiroto]

uebo14

A Song For The Lonely [shou/hiroto]

Jul 17, 2009 13:13

Title: A Song For The Lonely
Author: uebo14
Pairing/s: Shou/Hiroto
Genre: Angst, romance
Warnings: Bleeding and yaoi.
Disclaimer: I don't own them, unfortunately. D:
Summary: What happens in a night of secrets and deep wounds?

( People ask you what you're feeling, may it be hungry, sad, blank or pissed. But I always end up answering I'm happy when I'm not. )

fanfic, alice nine., hiroto, shou, oneshot, fanwork, shouxhiroto

Comments 10

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uebo14 July 17 2009, 11:22:36 UTC

Thank you. I honestly think that this was missing something, since I wrote it too fast that's why the concepts were slow and all 0_0 and yes, I think so, too. XDD; *facepalm*
Thank you for the nice comment!

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uebo14 July 19 2009, 06:05:50 UTC

Yup yup bb. I'll remember that. :) And thank you so much. ♥!

silveryxdark July 17 2009, 11:39:40 UTC

I think the message was portrayed well, and it was really sweet. I didn't really see any problems, save for a little bit of grammar in terms of the dialogue (:

"I came late. I broke my promise to you." He said.
The full stop at the end of the dialogue should be a comma and 'He' should be 'he'. That's all. Sorry for being a grammar freak.

uebo14 July 17 2009, 11:54:49 UTC

Thank you! I editted the entry and lol *blush* that's okay. I just happen to be in a hurry when I made this @_@ I didn't realize that I had some errors, when I just KNOW I did. XDD

silveryxdark July 17 2009, 11:56:19 UTC

(: I really liked your style of writing though! I'd love to read more of your work ^^ ShouxHiroto is my A9 OTP~

uebo14 July 17 2009, 11:58:24 UTC

Thank you! Now I'm even more motivated to do fanfics here since I write them all in paper >_>;;
I see. I love this pairing too. <3333 *hugs them*

ballad July 17 2009, 11:44:11 UTC

this is so sweettttt~<3
I love it&hearts
sweety Pon X3 *slaps by Hiroto*

anyways, I just think you might be add a bit more explanation because I was a bit confused with the story~
&hearts

uebo14 July 17 2009, 11:55:57 UTC

Awww thank you deeaaaar ♥ I'm glad you like it. XD

rofl I didn't know where to put it, I think the story is ok to be that short and really confusing lol, but anyways, I put up some explanation above. ^^b

shuffled_world July 18 2009, 10:55:01 UTC

*sniffs*
i love it, rina chan!
somehow, i can relate to it.
*facepalm*
i think i'm gonna cry.

uebo14 July 19 2009, 06:09:57 UTC

NOOOOO REN DDDDDD8 *pats your back*
I'm glad you understand what I mean by this fic tho. ^_^b