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Short Fic: Twisted

Jan 30, 2010 16:15

Title: Twisted
Author: roh_wyn
Word Count: 3755
Rating: PG
Characters: Djaq, Allan, Will, mentions Much, Little John, Robin
Spoilers: Mild spoilers for 2x05
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: My ownership is wishful thinking.
Notes: Written for rh_intercomm. Many thanks to wenrom31 for the excellent beta work and brainstorming session.

Summary: A twist on the events of 2x05 and ( Read more... )

author: roh_wyn, character: djaq, character: allan, rating: pg, character: will, cat: short fic, series 2

Comments 6

hippie_girl_31 January 31 2010, 01:55:33 UTC

I love a million things about this fic! I love the twist that poor Will was hung out to dry because Robin never uncovered Allan's treachery. And I love the way that Djaq was caught in the middle. She was stuck between being obedient to Robin and helping a friend as well as between Allan and Will ( ... )

roh_wyn January 31 2010, 17:22:04 UTC

Thanks so much for the detailed analysis! You rock.

I've had lots of tiny plot bunnies about Djaq and Will and Allan over the past year, and I think I tried to cram some of them into this story, lol.

I have a whole theory on Will and religion, but I'm saving it for "Passages", so no spoilers here!

Thanks again for reading. :)

ctquill January 31 2010, 05:41:08 UTC

Love it! Your writing really is impeccable. This is beautifully crafted. 2x05 could have turned out several different ways and it's fascinating to see an alternative explored. Poor Will!

roh_wyn January 31 2010, 17:23:06 UTC

Thank you, that's very nice of you to say.

I've been sort of toying with a rewrite of this episode, but I've never been able to get an ending worked out. Even this one is a bit of hand-waving really.

I think it works out alright for Will in the end, but I have no idea how, lol.

mai_shiranui January 31 2010, 06:20:56 UTC

What an interesting turn of events! I love so many things about this, it's incredibly well written for starters!

roh_wyn January 31 2010, 17:23:58 UTC

Thanks so much. I started writing this for that scene rewrite challenge at hoodland, but I sort of abandoned it. The plot bunny came in handy for this challenge. ;)