if it feels a lot like it (it is it)

Oct 15, 2013 23:17


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a/n: well i wonder how i could finish this to such a great song like Julian. summary taken from the song too.
something like that )

frenia, krishun

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chocolaiit October 15 2013, 19:24:22 UTC
odg..i just totally dig the angst here sob just what i needed.. i like it how you made sehun's character so strong but deep inside he is broken and he is so in love with yifan. still i love the way you ended it xD

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uchinole October 16 2013, 06:22:40 UTC
I was lucky making what you needed then /sob along/

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hipployta October 16 2013, 01:24:09 UTC
Sehun trying to stay himself and stay strong while Yifan stays because Sehun doesn't break no matter how he provokes him until eventually he admits he's in love with Sehun but Sehun isn't willing to admit he's in love too because he doesn't want to risk himself...until the end

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uchinole October 16 2013, 06:27:49 UTC
You know you just wrote a possible summary right? ⊙‿⊙
Then we both made it like little Sehun has trust issues tehehe

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hipployta October 16 2013, 07:24:13 UTC
Sehun doesn't have trust issues...Kris created that type of environment in which he has to guard his heart even after Kris says he loves him until he PROVES it

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uchinole October 16 2013, 08:15:07 UTC
Oh, I see that point now..

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indira22 October 16 2013, 03:00:21 UTC
this is so deep in so many way,u dont fall to someone that might break you but at the end that "wall"is something that make u fall..and for Yifan to finally make that confession..oh God let me cry..

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uchinole October 16 2013, 06:31:03 UTC
I thought maybe I focused too much on that 'deep' that what goes for characters wasn't as good, phew

Cry all you want... Tough man Yifan(ΦωΦ)

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baby_duck_yuto October 18 2013, 07:57:21 UTC
my heart hurts for Sehun TT___TT

(good job on this one ^^d
altho it's so sad huhu)

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uchinole October 18 2013, 11:16:03 UTC
set the sadness aside, boy is loved now (●´∀`●)
thank you for commenting (●´∀`●)

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