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Sep 28, 2006 21:21

Today in my Tolkien class, Professor Stacey gave a mini-bio of Tolkien's life. Very impressive guy - he become a professor (which is equivalent to the chair of the department here in the US) of Oxford at the old age of 33. However, his problem was that he devoted a lot more time to his own personal pursuits (writing languages and then creating ( Read more... )

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anonymous September 29 2006, 22:45:28 UTC

everything's a little sudden and anticlimatic. I like the story line, just needs more detail and flowing language which u can do easily when you go back and edit it. hehe the great haseley...that sounds funny

-benedictmau

ucanthandlethis September 30 2006, 03:58:29 UTC

thanks for the comment lil' bro! yeah the ending is not that great but because i wanted to finish the story and post it in the bloggernet asap, i decided to quickly wrap things up. i had to change the purpose of the Wroxton from what we had said in class. But yeah, I would definitely love to expand on the ending (and the story as a whole - I was going to have Witta mentor Wulfgar in the ways of fighting the wolves)