Comments | ubiquitousmuse: Endless Nights | PG13

ubiquitousmixie in ubiquitousmuse

Endless Nights | PG13 | The Closer

Jan 26, 2012 00:37

Title: Endless Nights
Prompt: Brenda can’t take many more nights like this.
Challenge: A to Z Drabble Meme; Q is for Quiet
Fandom: Brenda/Sharon, Brenda/Fritz The CloserRequested by: mostlyharmless ( Read more... )

fic: endless nights, fandom: the closer, rating: pg13, fan fiction

Comments 16

die2liveforever January 26 2012, 23:06:31 UTC

Guh, break my heart, why don't you? This was really, really beautiful. Awesome job!

ubiquitousmixie January 27 2012, 23:05:14 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

silverstarsmile January 27 2012, 00:26:38 UTC

Hey, its mostlyharmsless from tumblr, just wanted to write a more detailed comment here.

I love that you took the guilt and worked it into this story. Just the emotions running through this... its fabulous. This quote "She could reclaim some of her sanity. She could have a reprieve from her guilt and her love and her hate." It just really resonated with me. Thank you for writing. :)

ubiquitousmixie January 27 2012, 23:05:33 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the comment!

margotgrissom January 27 2012, 22:29:24 UTC

Very well done, hon! Angsty, believable, and perfectly in-character.

ubiquitousmixie January 27 2012, 23:05:50 UTC

Thank you so much!