Comments | ubiquitousmuse: Time After Time| PG

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Time After Time| PG | 30 Rock

Mar 10, 2010 02:42

Title: Time After Time
Prompt: between the lines, realization
Challenge: ham_napkin
Fandom: Jack/Liz, 30 RockRating: PG ( Read more... )

fandom: 30 rock, fan fiction, fic: time after time, rating: pg

Comments 15

stamatina_rae March 10 2010, 08:02:59 UTC

Jesus, this has me on the verge of tears! But it was wonderful, in the saddest, most heart breaking way. Wake up Donaghy!!!

ubiquitousmixie March 14 2010, 22:29:29 UTC

thanks so much for your feedback! i'm glad you liked it!

muic March 10 2010, 08:24:23 UTC

Dammit I really thought they were going to kiss. JACK DONAGHY YOU ARE ALREADY SWAPPING SPIT, KISS HER ALREADY.

ubiquitousmixie March 14 2010, 22:29:56 UTC

i really wanted them to kiss too, but that would have been way more boring of a fic ;) thanks for reading!!

omnomnom17 March 10 2010, 10:38:25 UTC

Oh, this was so bloody sad! The whole way through I was thinking "Just kiss, dammit!"

The idea of one of them realising just how perfect they are for each other while the other remains oblivious is just heartbreaking. This was really beautifully written. Lovely work!

ubiquitousmixie March 14 2010, 22:31:27 UTC

thanks so much for the comment :) i'm really glad you enjoyed it!

lz1982 March 10 2010, 15:21:06 UTC

Ack, this was so sad! But in a good way.

ubiquitousmixie March 14 2010, 22:31:46 UTC

thank you :)

samuraichikx March 11 2010, 02:39:00 UTC

AWWWW!! -frowny face-
DAMMIT JACK! YOU KNOW WHAT SHE'S HINTING AT, KISS HER ALREADY!

-ahem- Sadness aside, I enjoyed this

ubiquitousmixie March 14 2010, 22:32:10 UTC

:D glad this inspired you to yell at Jack :-P thanks for reading!