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Not Up To This | PG | 30 Rock

Jan 26, 2010 02:15

Title: Not Up to This
Prompt: I don't have it in me
Challenge: ham_napkin
Fandom: Jack/Liz, 30 Rock
Rating: PG
Word Count: 501
Disclaimer: Not mine. Wish they were. Please don't sue.
Author's Note: My first instinct was to read this prompt in a completely dirty way, but I was in the mood to write something angsty. Let me know what you think!

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fandom: 30 rock, fic: not up to this, fan fiction, rating: pg

Comments 11

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ubiquitousmixie January 29 2010, 06:51:49 UTC

thanks for reviewing :)

lz1982 January 26 2010, 15:01:12 UTC

Aww. Liz is right, that Nancy is trouble. That muddled accent suggests she must be a foreign spy.

ubiquitousmixie January 29 2010, 06:52:11 UTC

lmfao!!

thanks for the comment!!

ams87 January 26 2010, 16:31:28 UTC

Nice. You planning on carrying it on or not?

ubiquitousmixie January 29 2010, 06:53:36 UTC

i'm not sure if i will carry it on. i had sort of meant it as a drabble. perhaps i will...who knows!

thanks for commenting!

kris10_loveee January 26 2010, 19:30:59 UTC

Well, personally I'd like to see a follow up to this one.
And I soooo agree with Liz, btw. :)

Great job!

ubiquitousmixie January 29 2010, 06:54:28 UTC

maybe i'll follow up - depends on the muse! thanks for commenting :)

mindymakru January 27 2010, 06:10:42 UTC

I like the simplicity of this. They are both really in character. And I just like the image of Liz sitting there on the couch while Jack carries on his usual haphazard lovelife, cos they really are that IN each other's lives and they don't realise how weird it is. I also always like when Liz stands up to him a bit, particularly if it stops him going on and on about some OTHER lady who is never as good for him as she is.

END OF RANT.

Nice work, you!

ubiquitousmixie January 29 2010, 06:55:13 UTC

thanks for the super sweet comment! i'm glad you liked it!!