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ubiquitousmixie

Drabble Challenge - Post #5

Jun 09, 2009 23:24

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Danielle who decided to do a drabble challenge. She'd been pretty good about being succinct and actually followed (for the most part) the rules of what a drabble is meant to entail.

Well, that's a thing of the past. Sorry, guys...I hope you don't mind that I've become increasingly more wordy as the posts ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

ellipsisoveruse June 10 2009, 04:44:59 UTC

Nice work!

ubiquitousmixie June 10 2009, 04:54:36 UTC

you are the biggest brat in the whole wide world and i am not going to write any more requests for you!

ellipsisoveruse June 10 2009, 05:07:41 UTC

Well fine! I won't post the other half of my comments then! nyah nyah! :-p

(You totally rock that icon, though!)

ellipsisoveruse June 10 2009, 05:06:49 UTC

Haha, see what happens when you complain about the length of my comments! Are you complaining now ( ... )

Thread 5

kris_me June 10 2009, 06:35:26 UTC

Well Danielle, you've done it again...amazed me beyond words!
I freakin' LOVED my drabble so much!

I'm with Callie, it is the passengers job to keep the driver awake...and what a 'wake up' call Addie got! ;)

"....but Callie was not one to leave a job unfinished"..That's my Callie, I love her!

"Are we there yet?" LMFAO

I really did love this, I'm extremely happy with what you did with the prompt. It's hot, sexy, playful, funny, and did I say hot???

The Authors Note gave me a chuckle as well...lol

Thanks so much hun!

And the other drabbles were also incredible! Dawning was great and I'm so glad Addie took the leap and planted that kiss on Callie! =)

You seriously have me hooked on this pairing now...SERIOUSLY!!

momentsofbeing4 June 10 2009, 10:17:20 UTC

Wow, that Virginia Woolf one, I swear I had to read it about three times I enjoyed it so much. Tricky character but you managed it really well :)

lakela June 10 2009, 13:48:30 UTC

You are AMAZING!!! That drabble was incredible!! So visual, so much tension... I've read it three times already and each time it gets better. I want a follow-up! I am very much liking jealous Addison! (I totally agree with iampecola, this should turn into a chaptered fic)

And that stolen kiss... WOW. All kinds of win.

"Callie's arms hung slack by her sides, her lips frozen with shock, and then it all…changed."

I may have whimpered out loud with this.

"Author's Note: This doesn't quite follow the request, but hopefully you are still satisfied with the outcome!"

I am beyond satisfied with the outcome. You're one hell of a writer and, specially if you write Caddie, I can assure you, I will be more than satisfied!!
THANK YOU!!

lakela June 10 2009, 13:53:06 UTC

Oh, I was so excited with my drabble that I forgot to say how much I loved the last one, as well. Car sex? *nods approvingly*

"Are we there yet?"

LOL

missmarge2005 December 14 2009, 15:49:16 UTC

i'm starting to become a fan of cali and adison