The Fabulous Ladies Night Club (5/8)

[ubimod]

Title: The Fabulous Ladies Night Club
Author: ubiquirk
Rating: R
Genre: genfic: action-adventure, humor, drama
Word Count: ~14K
Character: Xander
Disclaimer: Not mine; no money.
AN: Set between S3 and S4 of Buffy. Written for

Comments

[sparrow2000]

Eek, damn I need to go hide behind a cushion now!

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and found it spooky!

[selene2]

This is awesome. *bows down before you*

I can't wait for more!

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you're enjoying the story!

[hello_spikey]

Poor Xan! Even clued in, he can't escape butt-monkey-dom!!

But maybe Kit isn't evil? Right? Maybe there's something sinister going on with Doris and the singapore slings and Kit is saving... the... hot guys?

*doesn't believe self*

Love that "You despicable... -ly gorgeous creature"!! Beautifully done.

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm so happy you like this part and the blend of that two lines together! Poor Xander, indeed!

[kargrif]

eckkkkkkk!! no Xander no!! don't fall for her evil charms!!! arrrrrrrgh!! *hides eyes*

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! It's great to hear that you enjoyed it and found it suspenseful!

[electricalgwen]

A few minutes later, the friends fall in on themselves, collapsing in laughter as a group, faces turning away and in like a moonflower closing at the first hints of dawn.

Nice. All the descriptions here are well done - the Cordy group description is particularly evocative.

WWBD? Excellent. :)

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm very happy that you enjoyed this part and the descriptions! And the ability to work in how Xander said working at The Fabulous made him think WWBD!